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Disobedience and Devotion [Sequel] - Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2021-10-10 21:56:53 +0000 UTC

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Laying the groundwork for an exciting story to come! Thanks for sharing ;)

I appreciate these suggestions! Thank you! Honestly it's been such a struggle figuring it out, since I want it to relate to everything that is going to happen outside their marriage, too. 😅I need to decide soon, esp since I'm working on a little project for this verse.

I’m not sure if these are aligned to where the story is going but here are some title ideas for this sequel haha 😀 Grit & Gratitude Grit & Grace Sensuality & Strength

Definitely is, and I can see everyone's different POVs! I'm very happy you like Lena's character in this one. And you must be really good at making predictions, because there's a LOT of soft moments ahead! 😊 Thank you so much!

I welcome all of the different opinions! And I'm glad you were able to find humor in this chapter. It was intended to lean more towards funny than outright mean, but Lena's definitely being vindictive because yeah, she's never had Kara's opportunities and she wants to be treated as an equal. They both have some growing to do together! Thank you! 😊

This is actually such an interesting discussion. Personally, I like Lena’s attitude and character. If anything, it’s their mutual stubbornness that makes their soft moments even better. Thanks for feeding us 😌.

Maybe a different opinion than some others here but Lena actually cracks me up. Good for her! Yes she’s stubborn and maybe doesn’t fully think her actions through but she’s never really been afforded the chance to, has she? Very excited to see her growth but tbh Kara deserved it this time 😜

I'm sorry you're annoyed. If it's any consolation, she will realize what she's doing to Kara in the next chapter (if she hasn't already by the end of this one).

I love that you binged it all! I feel like this website isn't conducive to finding things for reading purposes. All of my full chapters/updates are listed under the Supercorp tag, so check in there for stuff you might have missed (on a web browser, because apparently mobile is horrible. I've emailed Patreon about this and it's a work in progress for them 🙄). It delights me that you enjoyed the whole story! I think some things about this Lena will never change, but others things will in this sequel, and hopefully you'll find it all very interesting! Thank you, and more soon! ❤️💙

I feel like it's a good thing that there are people who can side with Lena in this, and Kara, and see both of their perspectives. They're both supposed to be products of their environment, and Kara is being over protective in stifling ways, while Lena also isn't stopping to think about why Kara might be acting like that. You totally understand Lena's POV! That's exactly right. It's not just a matter of the specific circumstances, but she also wants Kara to confide in her. I love your way of summarizing this -- exactly. If Kara had talked through everything with her, she would have actually stayed home in this instance. Next chapter might well be titled, "learning to compromise." 😂

The sequel will have a different feel than the original, I think, in terms of the conflicts that arise. There will be lots of breeding!

Thank you so much!!! 😄

They're both definitely leaning back into old habits instead of using better coping mechanisms. I felt Kara would fall back into her way of leading things due to the babies and Lena's condition, and of course Lena is not tolerating that, especially given how far they've come. 😂 But it had to happen, all for the introduction of Henshaw. Thank you!! 😁

Lena is starting to annoy me. She is causing Kara pain both physically & mentally.

Can I Just Say, Why hadn’t I read this story ions ago…because I mean Asdgjkflkf This is beyond perfect I love the plot of this whole Story We already know Lena’s Not the one to be a tamed anything !!! 👀😩 I can only imagine That Lena’s going to continue being herself instead of the obedient Omega She is supposed to be or what society is expected of her ! Is it bad that I read all chapters in one sitting 😬 and now I’m patiently going to wait for more 💜✨

I’m with impulsive, petulant, and petty Lena on this one! It is SO deeply irritating and paternalistic to have someone withhold information “for your own good” or “for your protection,” especially when Kara shared information before when Lena was more disobedient and less devoted lol. I think that’s why Lena bucks so hard when she defies Kara because she wants her trust above all and she wants to be treated as an equal human being with Kara and alphas in general. Her omega is also hella weak for Kara’s D and in previous chapters she has been way more amenable and understanding if she’s getting her back blown out and treated like an adult. They are still learning about each other and their buttons so hopefully these two stubborn fools learn to ✨compromise✨ better in the future lol

Sigh. Will they ever know peace??😭😭I just want freedom and justice for my babies and lots of breeding.

Great chapter I love this story

Rocket

I feel for Kara with the over protectiveness but goodness she kinda tied her own self to the post so to speak with not being honest with Lena. Lena sure is impulsive and headstrong in this one but Kara not giving her news of town just seems a little overbearing. And certainly the need to protect is in hyperdrive but oof oof oof. The game of abstinence Is DEFINITELY a fun one for them though! Can’t wait to see how they sort their issues out!!

Thank you!!! 😊Henshaw’s role in this next part will be really important for the developments between Lena and Kara. And given what she little she knows about him so far, Kara would have kept Lena far away if she could have, but of course Lena had to meet him to move the plot ahead.

Overall I think they’ve come a long way as a couple and that will be highlighted in other chapters, but her behavior here was important for the main reason that she hasn’t completely changed over night — she still has this impulsive part of her that gets her into trouble (added onto pregnancy hormones) and Kara still isn’t trusting her to make her own judgment calls. They’ll talk it all out and good will finally come of it, but I don’t think Kara would have been okay with her meeting Henshaw in this chapter in any other way and she needed to meet Henshaw. I hope that makes sense and that you’ll like that the next few chapters include softer interactions between them as they learn to trust each other more completely.

Jujubuhg

I love this verse but this Lena tires me out , is there just no middle ground with her ? I really feel for Kara

I love this series so much! 🤩🤩 Lena is such a disaster and I’m so here for it. I’ve got a bad feeling about Henshaw and can’t wait to see how it all plays out.


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