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Disobedience and Devotion [Sequel] - Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2022-01-13 22:36:21 +0000 UTC

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ToK

I think Hank knows or at least suspects something, and wants to infiltrate their group to either bring their doom or use their help to change the laws…

I stand by what I said before. They are at their best when they work together! Thanks for sharing ;)

Rocket

Ack! So sorry to hear about the plague situation you've been dealing with (remember to rest!!!! Drink water get good sleep!!! take breaks!!!!) but happy to help with any serotonin boosts! Definitely what this partnership is all about! You write the stuff we (I) yell all happy about it!!!

Yeah. That doesn’t make me feel any better 😂 but also I can’t wait for more of this story! Bring. It. On. But please me gentle 😅

That is totally understandable considering who he is in the actual show. Thank you!!! 😊❤️

The stuff with Henshaw is going to be interesting to write, especially because he has like 3 or 4 different motives, lol. I'm really looking forward to writing the next several chapters of this. Kara is honoring her promise to be more open with Lena and I think that's going to go a long way in building their trust. 😊Thank you!

Henshaw is definitely intrigued by Kara and Lena. 😂 Thank you! The bickering is fun to write, ngl. I know sometimes people aren't big on drama in the genre of smut, but I enjoy writing them at odds with each other as much as I enjoy writing them making up. She is, and she'll continue to be so after having them. 😊

Thank you! It's great getting to explore different fake abo time periods/settings and I enjoy the opportunity to use other language I wouldn't normally use in modern stuff. When I started writing this, the politics and tension seemed to be something of the past, but now... 😔 So happy you love the bond between them!

Lena's emotional journey in D&D is something I've spent a lot of time thinking about, and it's so cool that the story has brought you in for that ride, experiencing Lena's ups and downs that way. Sometimes I think the drama might be too much for a smut story, but I really wanted this one to be more than that, and I'm excited it still appeals with all that's thrown into it. Thank you. ❤️💙 Hank is a big part of this sequel, as are the pups. Can't wait to continue this!

Thank you! Hank's true intentions will shine through eventually and hopefully they will be... unexpected. I'm really excited to write the next chapter, which will involve their autumn festival and some important moments between Lena and Kara. ❤️💙

Been wanting to respond to these comments for a week now, but tons of family and friends came down with COVID this week (and month) so I've been nervous and saving this serotonin boost for when I needed it most. Underneath Kara's OOC persona as "Clark," she's totally Kara/Supergirl, or at least that's what I was going for when I wrote it. Your comment makes me so happy, especially since I'm playing with this very different verse and other social dynamics. This is one of the fics I write when I need to pull myself out of writer's block and it just makes my day that you enjoy it so much. ❤️ Thank you!

Gosh I love this series so so much but Henshaw makes me sooo nervous! Excellent excellent chapter!

I can’t decide if Henshaw is the good version or the bad version of himself which worries me about his motives. I also have a strong feeling if he doesn’t know that Kara is a woman he suspects it. All of that combined as me on edge every time I read a new chapter. It was nice to see the softer side of Kara and Lena too. It always makes me smile when Kara lets that persona slip away and her walls come down so that she can just BE. I love their connection so much!

Henshaw either knows or strongly suspects that Kara is a woman. That doesn’t bode well for the entire Danvers family. I love how their bickering continues and leads to animal sex. Lena is such a fireball, even when pregnant with twins. 😁

Hank knows!!!!!! I don’t knows. Great chapter!! This took me to this time! I love the language here. The politics make me uneasy. The tension of the face makes me uncomfortable. I love the bond between them, though.

Every time a new chapter is dropped im thrown into a rollercoaster of emotions while reading it. I feel so much for Lena, doesn't matter if she's submissive for once or on one of her sprees against Lockwood or any other bad guy. In the middle of all this drama it's seriously hotter than hot and speckled with humor. Kara is thawing more and more. Can't wait to see what Hank is up to (why do I think it's no good?). I somehow have no fear for the pups. More for Kara's identity. I'm sure our ladies will make sure the future will look bright for their kids.

Oh my god, that ending was so romantic. I am still undecided about Hank Henshaw’s true intentions, but I look forward to wherever you take this next. I hope Kara and Lena can open up to each other further before the pups arrive. As always, wonderful work ❤️

Rocket

This might be a little strange but despite this being a historical I feel like this story is one of the most true to character version of them. Kara being obstinate and head strong yet only wanting to keep people safe and Lena being kind and caring but definitely a “ends justify the means” sort of gal really shine in this and the beginning argument shows it so so well. Always love to see flawed characters they’re so interesting that way!! And then they come to an agreement and understand it’s then it’s So Hot and So Soft and I just wanna wrap them both up in a hug there at the end ugh. UGH I LOVE THIS ONE DEARLY.


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