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The Beauty of Experience - Chapter 18

🕑 Added 2022-01-25 22:13:07 +0000 UTC

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I'm getting nervous that Andrea has hacked one of their phones...possibly Sophia since she dropped off a phone for her...but that's also a new low, and I don't want any of them to have to deal with that! Thanks for sharing ;)

Adam Poling

Okay cool thanks. Hope your feeling better

Later this week! I didn't get the chance to post BOE at all last month on ao3 so I'm a little off schedule there. Hurt my wrist badly - to the point it was an agony just to do the formatting stuff. A good number of recent updates were written with text-type, but things are better now.

Adam Poling

When will chapter 19 open for the $5 patrons?

I was thinking the spy is either Eve or Nia. Eve maybe because she’s mostly written just like her canon character in fics, a backstabbing spy. But maybe Andrea could be the new alpha Nia is seeing? Nia is sharing all these sweet details because she’s happy with for her friends, thinks Andrea is asking questions because she’s taking an interest in her life or whatever. Andrea’s a master manipulator and if you’re a good person, you won’t be able to tell right away that she’s playing you.

I'm not sayin' nothing... not a word. 😂 I'm kind of on the fence as to whether I'm going to address this in Chapter 19 - possibilities... possibilities. I'd better get back to writing!

Rocket

I had a thought literally while in the shower today about this fic and I need to put it down here before the next chapter comes up but: WHAT IF THE MOLE IS EVE!? I don’t know the the theory really holds water (Sophia still talks to Eve? Maybe she keeps in touch??) but out of all of the adults - and I’m pulling for an adult because either Sophie or Andy would just be 😭😭- she would have probably the “best” motive. IVE CONNECTED THE DOTS IVE CONNECTED THEM!! 😝

I Just hear Kara, Keep calling their Pup That constantly and her keeping up how big their kid is growing !!! When the girls find out 🥺😩 Natty I feel will probably be a little Jealous because I mean technically she is the baby. But she’s gonna warm up I can’t wait Protective Puppy Kara I’m ready ! Oh Mama Bear Lena I’m definitely ready 👀 This story is my favorite along with every story you have ever written 💕✨

A jellybean for sure. 🥺 That's a cute idea. You'll find out what's happening with Andrea soon-ish. Small time skip in the next chapter and I'm excited for the events of the next several chapters. Protective puppy Kara moments ahead, and mama bear Lena moments. 😊

I embraced the whole role-play idea after mentioning it in another chapter. Felt like a good thing to pair with Kara taking charge. That's not to say Lena won't stand up for herself or Kara, but more so that Kara can just handle things how she wishes. 😁 The next few chapters will be fun. Thank you!

Those are great guesses! I think Lillian and Sam are like... 🤝 when it comes to their hatred of Andrea and desire to get back at her for all of the years of grief she's given Lena. Thank you so much!

I truly can't wait until you find out how Andrea knows that info. I considered rushing things along and revealing it in this one, but it didn't fit with my original thought, so I stuck to the plan. Honestly, Lena has no business getting heat sickness when Kara is right there and they've been physical nonstop, but yeaaaah, plausible excuse for the role-play? Maybe? Thank you! I'm happy you're still enjoying this one just as much! May it never be like that meme with the horse drawing. 😓

Thank you! Haha, yeah, they stopped going at it for about 5 minutes and Lena couldn't deal. 😁

Thank you! It's an important step for Kara, along with supporting Lena in parenting, 😊 I kinda just decided to include the roleplay since it was mentioned in another chapter. Had a moment where I was like "*FLAIL FLAIL* JESUS I HOPE THIS IS HOT*" but in the end I was happy with how it turned out. Thank you! 😂

Thank you! I take my commitment to adding to the story and smut supply very seriously. 😅 In all seriousness, if y'all ever get bored, let me know. I have a lot more to tell of this story and I'm sure some are like "YESSS" and others are like "nooo" and my mind is like, "here's 10 more ideas, write them all RIGHT NOW and finish your other fics" so my brain is constantly like this: 🤯 with stories and ideas.

Awww That Ending, * A jellybean a skittle or M & M * Kara’s definitely gonna give their Kid that Nickname up until it’s born 👀 I’m eyeing Andrea even more closely now than before…I really can’t wait for Kara to Officially deal with Lena’s Ex cause 😩 I’m imagining Them at the OB Office and Kara Hearing that heart beat 🥺 She’s definitely going to become a true protective puppy when she does ✨

Love the role play at the truck stop and then driving home while Kara fucked her. Oh my that was hot.🔥🔥. Kara is now in charge, hell yeah and she was so sweet telling Lena that she was tired of Andrea’s shit. You go Kara, get that crazy bitch out of y’all’s life as much as possible and let her know, by whatever means necessary, that she’s just shit on the soles of your boots.

I almost suspect Lillian of telling Andrea just to rub in her face how much happier Lena and the girls are with Kara than they ever were or will be with her. I was thinking maybe Sam, too, but Sam probably sees more clearly how that would just end badly for Lena. I can't wait for more!

Rocket

Andy seemed awful fast to deny it wasn’t her but honestly it seems so out of character for her to give Andrea that info especially unprompted but it doesn’t seem like Sophia did it either! They’ve got a spy in their midst dun dun dun. Poor Lena trying to be a good mom/host and getting sick from it. But it’s ok cause that role play HOO BUDDY. And Kara going to finally take charge about stand her ground CANT WAIT TO SEE IT. We’re almost at 20 chapters of this and it’s still as good as ever. You’re absolutely amazing with this story!

Aww, I always love the talks they have with the girls! Also can't believe Lena got heatfever even tho they were at it like bunnies ^^'

This was an amazing chapter! I love that Kara is gonna take charge on handling Andrea and I can’t wait to see how that turns out. The role play was also really good! That’s not usually my jam but I really enjoyed it with them. Very nice!!

I realized recently that you do about 10k words per BoE update and there are 18(!) updates, so I decided to add the word counts you listed and the word counts for the first 4 chapters. BoE is 198,676 words long. This is longer than: - Any book in LoTR - Dune - Catch-22 - The Grapes of Wrath - A lot of other famous stuff You're within 10k words of beating (heh) Moby Dick (206,052). Good job! That's a hell of a lot of writing!


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