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The Beauty of Experience - Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2022-05-01 03:51:30 +0000 UTC

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Well, just to prove that I am really struggling to navigate the patreon site on my cellphone I just deleted my comment unintentionally by trying to read your response to another one hahaha so I'll leave another comment because you deserve it, but I hope you still have it on your e-mail or something. Bear with me because English is not my first language. Currently I've read this fic up to the 26 chapter and wow this is one of my favorite stories no doubt. Love the way you tell it. You're so creative and care about the writing of every situation, every character and it really warms my heart to read it. You have a beautiful talent and I can't wait sometimes to read another chapter. I read this incredible fast and I wish I didn't just to spend more days in the company of Kara's sweet nature and Lena's brave personality. I feel so captivated by the plot and I truly wish you continue to do what you clearly love. I will say it again: I'm in love with this story (and honestly all the others I've already read from you) and hope you'll update it soon. I love smut as much as the next person, but to have it combined with a plot so beautifully and skillfully written it's just amazing

There's quite a few multi-chapters (and WIP multi chapters)! If you hop over to the pinned post, you'll find the master list with descriptions of each story that's been posted. ☺️ I hope you find more things you enjoy! Thank you so much again. It means everything!

I'm so so happy to support the dream of such an excellent writer. The writing quality just shows how much you care about it. Well, I will just keep reading to find more multi-chapters because everytime i finish one of your one/short fics I desire for them to last a little longer ☺️

You are doing it right and welcome! Thank you very much for becoming a patron! It's the reason I'm able to put some of my time towards writing and create something new each week. I wouldn't be able to write without wonderful patrons such as yourself, and writing is my dream, so I'm eternally appreciative. It made my night to hear you love my stories. There's a lot of fic I've written (200+ updates), and it takes a surprising amount of time to post updates (whether on here or ao3) so I just post on random nights when I've updated on here too usually. There's no real rhyme or reason to it, and it seems no matter how much I try to plan to post on specific days, on nights I hope to update on ao3, something ALWAYS goes awry for me. 😅 I will definitely write more long fics in the future if everyone wants that. I'm currently writing several multi-chapters and desperately trying to get back to others.

Yeah, I scorched the earth underneath Andrea, but I have plans for the drama & her development. ☺️ I know, Nia had it rough in this situation, and I'm still in the process of addressing that & the stuff with the kids -- more on that in the upcoming chapter. There were some definite hints about Andrea/Nia in several chapters beforehand, so it's cool you picked up on it! Thank you for being a patron - I truly would not have been able to continue this or any of the stories without this platform!

oh my god, the drama levels of this chapter is *chef's kiss*. and jeez, you are indeed making it hard for us readers to feel any remorse toward andrea huh? i feel so sad for the kids and nia most especially since she seemed smitten over andrea, and hey that rare coupling is actually a surprise! i might have sensed something when she mentioned a girlfriend earlier in the chapter. this part of the plotfeels like the peak of drama though. so happy i got to read the updates here instead of waiting them out on ao3!

Hi there and welcome! Yeah, you had really good guesses about what would happen. ☺️ I think it's complicated when it comes to kids, because in this case the girls still want a relationship with Andrea. Especially Sophia. On the other hand, Lena wants to shield them from everything as much as possible and doesn't want to create even more tension. There's a moment during Kara's birthday party actually where Eve, Nia and Lena are sitting at a table and they kind of have a pact/conversation (slap their hands on each other) and that was to kind of show/provide a moment of foreshadow that Nia would be joining their club so to speak. 😂 So Eve and Nia have met and I'm sure they will bond over Andrea's awfulness. There are some things ahead with Sophia's school situation/in general!

ToK

I KNEW IT !!! I knew Andrea was dating Nia to use her to spy on Kara and their family. I called it !!! Though I didn’t expect her to pay Siobhan for a false contract with Kara… my God, she’s so fucked up ! I can’t wait for Bernardo to learn all the ways his daughter fucked up… And while I agree that no matter the personal relationship between exes the children shouldn’t be deprived of one parent over the other (as a kid of divorced parents myself), when one of them is toxic to their children like Andrea is actions should be taken. At least the distance will to good for the girls…. Also, what if Eve and Nia meet and bond over their pain and they become a couple ? That would be awesome !! On a side note, I don’t want Sophia to stay in DC Prep… that school’s narrow-minded view will finish what Andrea started and completely screw her mind !

Siento que Kara se guarda sus sentimientos :(

I love their relationship. So much. Thanks for sharing ;)

Officially Kara was soft on Andrea !!! I feel like she could do more damage but that goes To show Andrea what kind of Kara is compared to herself Lena’s mate is the perfect example I’m mean no one is perfect but the restraint Kara holds. The respect she has for Lena and then Poor Nia I feel for her I loved the photo shoot “ There’s a snake in here ? “ only Kara being clueless as to why Jack and Nia had all the Omegas go take a break 😂 I mean can we blame them I know I can’t !!! If Andrea ends up in a ditch somewhere I’m okay with that * hands rub together * ahh I can’t wait for the next update ✨💕

Kirstin Leigh McWhorter

Honestly? I can't remember when I read your fics and didn't love 'em.

Rocket

I thought I had commented on this but apparently I didnt??? But mostly I just wanna say I will throw hands for Nia. Like we all were on Lena and Kara's side in this feud but Andrea went and made Nia cry and OH BUDDY IT'S ON NOW. Loved Jack in this!!! I love seeing Jack in anything and it's always nice when he's at his most charming self and helping people feel comfortable! His banter with Lena was so cute I hope he shows up again. Kara justing standing there like 🧍🏼‍♀️😳 cracked me up the poor thing. Oh but I do feel really bad for the kids if they ind out Andrea all but abandoned them. She's been a shit parent but she's still THEIR parent and poor Sophia's gunna be devastated :( I'm REALLY curious what Andy might think - their relationship has been really rocky but again, she's still her parent and Andy's old enough to really understand what that means in a family dynamic sort of sense. There are some fics that when they get long they just kinda feel like they're saying the same thing over and over but you manage to keep this so fresh and interesting I'm in awe. AND STILL SO HOT TOO!!! Your talent always amazes

Ahh, that's a good question, I don't know how people act like that and sleep at night, but people sure do. I'm not sure if I'm evil for coming up with the plot. 😂 I don't blame you for not extending trust to Andrea, considering all she's done, and yes, it's all self centered and motivated by a desire to have Lena back. Thank you!!! 😁It is hard to tell when I'm writing if the surprises are actually going to come off as surprises. Thank you so very much! ❤️

I'm really happy it was a surprise. A few people did figure it out after a while and I worried it was obvious. 😂 Thank you!

Thank you! I hope you enjoyed it every time!

Andrea is the daughter of the devil. How can someone be that mean,sick & conniving? It takes an evil person to even think of those things. She so callously used and hurt Nia. I still don’t trust that bitch in anyway. She’s like Lex, so self centered and selfish that they think they can do no wrong. What an excellent plot twist that I sure as hell didn’t see coming. What a great author you are to weave all that chaos together and have a twist that no one saw coming. Excellent, excellent writing 👏👏👏

Brennan Murphy

Holy crap, like somehow I expected Andrea to up to some bull but not this! Kudos to you for having this plot twist be both a huge surprise and also perfectly in character for what you've written so far

Kirstin Leigh McWhorter

Read and re-read and re-re-read. As usual, this is my favourite thing I'll read today.


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