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Sex in the Suburbs - Part 3

🕑 Added 2022-02-08 20:43:49 +0000 UTC

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Oof, this chapter makes me want a character to slap some sense into Kara, maybe Alex. I could understand Kara’s jealousy here if she hadn’t been so oblivious for the past months making Lena feel bad the entire time. She’ll have some groveling to do once she realizes

Fictional jealousy is fun, real stuff not so much. Including the family group in this story has been my fave and they will be involved somehow in the fray with Sasha... 😁

Alex should have a lot of interesting things to say in upcoming chapters, especially since the whole family wants to move to the suburbs to join Lena and Kara. 😊

Not hugely a fan of the jealous lover trope because of *reasons* but I will say that I enjoyed that the entire friend group had Lena's back. Also, I wholeheartedly am here for Alex (or Brainy) calling Sasha out in front of Kara

Brennan Murphy

Alex is the absolute best at pointing out bullshit and I would absolutely howl with laughter if she remarked in front of Kara and Sasha that Sasha was being inappropriate and makes Kara realize that those omegas are trying to take advantage of her

I can tell you had fun!!! I look forward to see what you write and I can’t wait to see more of Jealous Kara haha the other Alpha’s oh boy 👀😂 you are more than welcome 💕✨

Me toooo. 😁

Jealous Kara is super fun and I can't wait to write more of that. There are just some stories that really lend themselves to sibling antics, and with this one, I can't help but lean into it. I definitely plan to continue exploring jealous Kara and there will be more interactions ahead with the alphas in the neighborhood. Thank you! 😁💙

Since Kara isn't very self aware, Lena might have to go full on Luthor. I can't wait to continue this one for a lot of reasons, but high on the list is the chance to continue writing Lena and Brainy brotp scenes. Mallory and Neil are probably the types that tie sweaters around their necks, so that is accurate imagining on your part. Lmao. I'm actually not sure what will happen if they do get their weekend getaway. Could be full on drama, or disastrous comedy. Thank you! 😊

I honestly meant to update this one much sooner! I felt inspired to continue it as soon as I wrote Part 2. I’m looking forward to writing more jealous Kara in this one and in general. It might take Kara a while to realize Lena’s feelings because it's just so fun to write her in the current predicament. Regarding claims and marriage: I think with what I've set up so far in both verses, they are important for different reasons. In BOE, Lena holds claim over Kara and vice versa, but this is seen as unconventional. In Sex in the Suburbs, Kara has just claimed Lena. Claiming entails a commitment, but in these two stories, I see it as a bit more one sided and possessive, even though it creates a biological link. Marriage is more of a two way commitment with an extra ceremony, and it creates a symbolic link. Having two forms of commitment is better than one. Thank you so much! It’s hard to prioritize which things should be updated when I want to write them all. I do really try to make sure that I'm updating the ones that people seem the most enthusiastic about reading, though.

Love jealous Kara stories 😁😁

Thank you!! Edging Kara is definitely a big part of this story, including where it is headed. Lena *had to* retaliate against Sasha after everything she's done. After writing this, I totally want to write more jealous Kara, since I've written a lot of jealous Lena stories. That weekend might play out in a different way than expected! 😂

If there can be a Supercorp fic with a mime kink there can be a fic with clown kink, no?

Okay I think I can, be the one to say Who doesn’t love a Jealous Kara !!! Alex being the sister she is I loved her level of petty in this Lmao…I will always love a Jealous Lena but Kara 👀😩 The power The Alpha’s flocking to Lena once she showed up in that bathing suit Loved this new chapter and can’t wait to see what else you have in store ✨💕🥰

Thank you! 😁

Rocket

Lena’s really letting those Luthor genes shine in this one oh man. Full out cackled at Brainy WHIPPING around to sternly look at Kara while eating his cake. He is the best little brother. Nice to see Jealous Kara for a spin too! And I really liked their convo in the kitchen about Kara living her life the same just a little more private. Definitely pictured Mallory and Neil as like those bland guys from any HGTV show 😂. Here’s hoping for that nice weekend with lots of conversations!!!

I’m so glad you updated this!!! I literally love this fic so much. I can’t get enough of Kara being jealous and territorial. Also her obliviousness is the icing on top. I love that the family all have Lena’s back and ate the cake because they knew what it all meant to her. I’m a little upset that Kara didn’t realize her mistake though. I love it when the claim and marriage are two separate commitments as well, do you think one means more then the other in this and boe? Or are they equal levels and to do both is like damn youre REALLY in it for love and forever. Anyway thank you again for updating this, I know you have a lot of on going fics and then monthly fics and what not, just wanted to say all of the writing and hard work is definitely appreciated!

I love this story‼️. Lena definitely knows how to keep Kara on edge and that results in mind blowing sex 😁😁. Loved the brownie on the shorts “shit” 🤣. Kara finally got to feel the “green eyed” monster. Alex needs to tell her that’s what Lena feels like constantly. Looking forward to the “sex,get pregnant weekend”

*chefs kiss* magnificent as always

😩😂

Hmm, Lena with a clown kink. You gotta follow through now.

I like to keep every story a little bit different! In some being mated is the same as being married, but in this particular verse and in BOE, for example, it’s not. Being mates is a physiological bond, and being married is a more symbolic and legal one, doubling up that commitment.

I'm trying to understand how mating bites work in this world vs marriage. I understand the bites to be (semi-)permanent and most wlw ABO seems to equate being mated to being married. How does it work in the Cliterature(tm) Cinematic Universe?


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