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AΩ - Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2022-02-12 22:18:15 +0000 UTC

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ToK

Oh no, I’m addicted to this story despite — or perhaps because of — the mixed feelings it evokes inside me. Which proves your brilliance really 😋

I think it's definitely a piece to be read as any dystopian kind of story where people are mistreated and violence becomes entertainment (i.e. The Hunger Games/Brave New World). I believe that's what the top tier patron had in mind, since Kara is physically so strong and in this context would be a fighter (and keeping to the history of what happened with gladiators/Spartacus, etc. They weren't a free people). With Lena's role, there's actually a bit more freedom (albeit limited) but she did sort of choose Kara. In a later chapter, it's clarified that she's had other options but refused them because they were brutes. Lena is under the impression that she's going to raise her children and give them a different kind of life, to an extent, with Andrea, but she's also aware of the unfairness of the system/ranks. Anyway, I would definitely say to stop reading this one if you find the content upsetting! There are a lot of other stories with non-dystopian tones and happier/comedic/fluffier themes. If you haven't read them already, I recommend Satisfaction Guaranteed, Sex in the Suburbs, Lunar or Later, or really any of the modern monthly one-shots.

ToK

I admit to have very ambivalent feelings about this story… on one hand, I believe it’s one of your best works, with the world building and the complexities of the characters. On the other hand, I couldn’t stand to read some parts. Slavery of any kind is abhorrent, and to put people on display like toys or tools, to possess them and make decisions for them like they have no mind of their own… it was repulsive. I also find Lena, I don’t know… inconsiderate, ignorant, naïve ? What does she thinks will happen if her children present as omegas, or worse as alphas ?

Thank you! I think she has some interesting dimensions that have yet to be seen, looking forward to getting into that. And Kara's growing eventual defiance... ☺️

This Lena is so fascinating, and I love how Kara toes the line between following the rules and standing up for herself. Thanks for sharing ;)

I might be a writer, but hey, I still feel like words fail me all of the time, lmao. You're so sweet! It should be a fun journey and I do hope you enjoy it. 😊💙 Thank you!

I have so many things I want to say to compliment this story and in turn your writing and world building and just EVERYTHING but unlike you words are failing me. I’m really looking forward to seeing where this story goes and what else happens! Just wow! Thanks for a great chapter 😁

Thank you! All good things to be thinking about and we'll see what unfolds! More to come next month. 😁 I hope you're doing well, JB!

I’ve really appreciated this fic for the opportunity to world build! I love every single genre, but I’ve always gravitated to science fiction and fantasy. I can’t wait to continue the whole world building process, including more types of creatures/beings and delving more into the class structure. At first when Nyxly was introduced in the show, I was kinda bored – but by the end, she won me over with her complexities and it’s been cool to get this chance to write her in a different way. She makes an interesting antagonist—vastly different than a villain like Lex or Morgan Edge. I’m so glad I was able to include her! Yeah, Kara! That’s another thing I’m enjoying with this one – the chance to write from her POV more. Certain prompts just lend themselves to Lena POV more, and I love writing Lena’s POV, but it’s also enjoyable to write Kara’s inner hero/fighter/dork. With Andrea… I almost made her a different rank, but it makes the most sense for her to be a beta, given her privileges. She’s definitely smitten with Lena and it is an uncommon thing. The next couple of chapter should lay out the answers to some of these questions! Thank you! I’m happy about it, too. 😊💙

Jbzq21

Woah! Spicyness is 🔥🥵. Lots of interesting things happening in this chap. I'm wondering if Kara's powers are getting damping by something or she doesn't have in this story. Either way it wad a realy great read.

Rocket

I SOME HOW MISSED THIS YESTERDAY ACK!! THE WORLD BUILDING ALL THE WORLD BUILDING HOO BOY! The bazar was such a treat! All the different aliens and creatures moving about it and the shop they go to visit! You paint such a vivid picture of any alien world in your stories but this one just pops something special imo. I love love LOVE Nyxly as the antagonist. You write her SO WELL I can literally hear her voice in all of her lines it’s incredible. And the PERCH! I don’t know what but that got me really good and immediately set the tone for the chapter. I’m so happy she’s in this story it really feels like it ups the ante for Kara. And SPEAKING OF KARA I know I said this the last time but her gladiatorial toughness combined with the dorkiness we know and love yet still with the emotional intelligence and depth of our favorite superhero is so good in this. The action scene alone you feel all her drive and motivation and fear! She’s so brave but she can’t have her last moment be like that! Endlessly fascinated by Lena’s standing in this world. Andrea seems very smitten which feels like an uncommon thing for a beta to be with an omega in this world especially since she’s still treating her a bit like property! But I wonder if Lena feels the same or if she’s viewing this all as a means to an end. She definitely seems to have more freedom than Kara but I wonder if that has more to do with Andrea than just Lena’s status? That comment about only alphas and omega’s having sex to breed is SUPER interesting and makes me wonder about the standing of the rest of the classes. All of this is just so so SO interesting and I’m so happy this is continuing. 🤩🤩🤩

It's an interesting relationship and I'm especially looking forward to scenes to come with Andrea! Lena's status as an omega is a bit better than Kara's as an alpha. In chap 2, Lena's not exactly free to do as she pleases, but she does have the ability to make some choices. She feels secure enough to make her opinions known (i.e. dislike of the fights), and she can do things like elect not to be in Andrea's company (at bar), but as far as fully challenging Andrea's will... no. That's a good question about why Lena wants a pup and I'm excited to answer it in the story. Those are good points about Kara versus Lena's outlooks! Thank you!!!! 😊

Thank you! It's been enjoyable to write and make up all of the pretend new ABO ranks and stuff. 😁 Posting another chapter next month!

Thank you! Yeah, Andrea was maybe going to be an omicron, but I kind of shoved that rank to the background after we got a new variant for it. I didn't want to write that word so many times. 😑

Thank you! I've been getting into the opportunity to write action and something different than the usual romcoms and stuff. 😁 Kara has some serious challenges ahead of her with Andrea and Nyxly. Building this world is going to be an interesting journey, especially when getting into Lena and Kara's back stories. I think one of the things that's most interesting to me about this world is that Lena is kind of compliant in it, and she and Kara both will have opportunities to grow. Can't wait to jump into the other stuff the top tier patron requested and the things I personally have planned for it! Thank you very much, and I hope you're safe and well, too, and that you're having a great weekend. 😊❤️💙

I am incredibly fascinated with the relationship between Andrea and Lena in this one. How much autonomy does Lena have, if any? Why is she so interested in having a pup when she could be bringing them into a world of servitude? I love the tension between Lena and Kara in this one. Kara is very obviously just trying to survive even if she’s fallen under Lena’s spell. While Lena seems caught between seeing Kara as a means to an end and being attracted to her. Great work!!!

Oh man, I had totally forgotten about this one but it’s so, so good! The setting and the plot are amazing and the sex is super hot (no pun intended lol). I can’t wait to see more of this!

This was amazing. Though I gotta say the ongoing horrors of living in these times of plague and pestilence have made me loathe the Greek alphabet 😩. I was all “fuck omicron” through this.

Holy shit this was amazing. This chapter really delivered on the gore and sexiness. Poor Kara is definitely caught up in some type of messed up thing between Andrea and Nxyly. Hopefully she can find a way to get out from under Nxyly’s thumb. Very interested in learning about Lena’s back story and how she ended up becoming a pretty possession to Andrea. Most of all I really hope both Kara and Lena can find a way to escape their keepers and raise their pup in a better and reformed world. Really enjoying this story and looking forward to reading what else is in store for our beloved SuperCorp in this time piece. Hope you are well and are staying safe. 💙❤️👍🏻👍🏻🤩


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