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Satisfaction Guaranteed - Chapter 6

🕑 Added 2022-05-15 22:20:58 +0000 UTC

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This is payback for Kara’s public handling of her in front of Jack 😂 It’s weird having Lucy as an antagonist, I’m used to having her as a friend and ally in most fic. Anyway, she’s being pretty invasive, intruding on them like that ! Too bad for her that Kara’s wrapped around Lena’s finger… or something else 😂

Thank you!! 😁 Even though Kara is a bit different in this story (being that she's more assertive and dominant), she's still the same soft alpha underneath it all. Hahaha, clue-by-four. I'm sure Lena will if it becomes necessary. Lucy isn't the type to give up, I think, but Lena is territorial so it's fun writing their conflicts & I'm excited to write Lucy's... hm, meddling, as the story continues. There will be more of the club! I do plan to stick to mostly Vanilla Lite BDSM (so that everyone can enjoy it) but introduce some ideas/kinky elements that I think people have enjoyed in other fics without maybe even realizing it falls into that category. That is possible! I think Kara's identity as a top will be explored, and Kara has some stuff to confide in Lena about her past relationship with Lucy.

Wow, what a chapter (and story)! I suspected that Kara's fantasy was going to be being mated to Lena! Yay! She's mentioning the feelings that she's catching. Lucy needs to catch a Clue-by-four! I'm sure Lena is more than willing to apply one to her. 😈 I absolutely loved Lena telling her that is she thinks sex is the only important thing in a relationship then she *should* go get some therapy! 🤣😂🤣 I'd like to see more of the club, too. I agree with the others that it should be anything painful. Some bondage, spanking, soft flogging with a super soft flogger, blindfolds, maybe a bit of temperature play (like ice or warm wax), and Lena finally going into a black room. I also think that down the line, maybe Kara with feel safe enough with Lena to let Lena take control of her for a night. We're already seeing bits of it with the toy Lena got her.

This is useful! That's actually just what I had in mind since Lena is a newcomer to all of this. I wanted to go for some light top/bottom dynamics, and definitely nothing painful. Thank you! I really appreciate hearing what you would like to see happen! 😊

Andrea is off to Mexico for a bit... 😂 But there may be various sorts of smack downs ahead. From the second chapter on with Satisfaction Guaranteed, I didn't even think I'd have Lena step foot in a club of any kind, but I did want some light top/bottom dynamics. Good to know my thoughts align with yours & others. It helps to hear your opinions! Thank you for sharing them! ☺️

i would love to see more of the club/Lena learning more about BDSM, but i think it should be more of an exploration of her journey with mental/emotional submission rather than throwing in any extreme pain or unusual kinks—maybe just some bondage/spanking/exhibitionism. just my two cents, loved the chapter as always

Well I have yet to see you get it wrong so 😊 You can see but I’m doing a little happy dance right now. I’m all for angst, exploration and communication! 😏

Oh hell no there’s no way she’ll be patient. It would be cool if Kara smacked Andrea down in BOE at the same time Lena’s smacking Lucy down. Our girls fight for their women 😁 I like the toy play. I do believe that Lena liked being a voyeur and I think she would like to be watched. A little BDSM since Lena is experiencing her sexual awakening but not to heavy. P.S. You definitely bring the heat and I Love it 😁

Yeah, I absolutely don't see Lena being as patient with Lucy as Kara is with Andrea in BOE. 😂 So this is going to go differently. Sometimes throwing in toy play is just a bit different and changes things up-- hopefully always in a good way. On a serious note, does everyone want more of the club? Drop a wish list below if there's any particular themes you'd all like to see Kara and Lena explore! Thank you -I always do strive to bring the heat. 😁💙

I don't always feel like I'm getting it right! Thank you - you're very kind. 🥺 She's probably not, but she won't be Andrea-BOE-level. There could be a little angst! And more exploration and communication. 😁

I had a vision in my head for the lingerie fashion show that didn't quite match up to what I wrote, so I'm happy it was hot/sensual/intimate. I admittedly kept it "lite" on the darker tastes. Part of me would like to delve into something a little different, nothing super far afield from what I normally write, but maybe throw in a few extra elements. It's sometimes hard to gauge with smut what people are going to like or hate. Lucy isn't going to be the toxic ex that Andrea is in BOE, so I think this story might veer a bit from competitiveness to more of a focus on exploration. I'd be interested to hear if anyone has strong feelings about the club and possible added BDSM elements. Thank you! I always appreciate hearing your thoughts. 😊

Lena smacked Lucy down so hard. I loved it. But I’m sure the bitch will be back and she’ll get smacked down again. I like the fact that Lena got some “toys” to play with Kara. Things are going to get interesting at the club and I can’t wait. Kara claim Lena now!! This story has the best and hottest sex ever. My phone is melting 🔥🔥🔥🔥

☺️ Ahh, thank you so much! Even when I'm writing more experienced Kara, I like her to be a softee.

How do you get the balance of hot af and cute af so perfectly right? You know I’m a sucker for this Kara and Lena softness. I have a feeling Lucy isn’t done trying to fuck things up. I just hope that Lena and Kara continue to communicate and make it out happily… maybe with a little angst? 😅

Rocket

HOO BOY WHAT A RIDE - ok so putting down “expensive lingerie fashion show boutique” for “fantasies I didn’t know I wanted but now do” wow that was. Hot? Sensual af? Incredibly intimate?? I love this story because it blends all of those into one and oh man the tease of Kara with some darker tastes was great but even better at the end of it just being the ultimate fantasy of total commitment 🥺. Also I fucking GASPED with glee at Lena’s little gadget gift for their date. Absolute fun there and right in front of the competition hehehe. The club is a SUPER interesting idea and makes sense for this Kara and her line of work/what we know of her history. I wonder if they’ll spend anymore time there or if Lena’s good with the small show she got. Great chapter!

Kirstin Leigh McWhorter

*insert dreamy sighs* I love your fics and how soft Kara can be at times!


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