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She's All Alpha - Chapter 5

🕑 Added 2022-08-15 18:59:11 +0000 UTC

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ToK

Wow ! What a great chapter. So Lena is discovering her sexuality and so is Kara, but I wonder if Lena is also questioning her gender/dynamic ? Because while she seems happy to be an omega (apart from all the societal norms stacked against her) she seems to also like being an alpha, so maybe when she’s outed (because she will be eventually, even if it lasts until graduation) she’ll want to continue being an alpha sometimes (like gender-fluid, or maybe dynamic-fluid ?)… and maybe Kara will want her to 😉 And I keep hoping for them to include Lucy, even if just occasionally…

Whoa, thank you! It kind of amazes me that you thought you'd hate it, but it turned out to be your fave. I'm happy it didn't turn out the other way around! I think if I read fan fiction, I would 100% avoid fics where Lena or Kara had other romantic interests (or dalliances). Which I guess makes me a hypocrite, but I like the idea of Lucy being a complication here, probably because of the film this is somewhat based on. I'm overjoyed that you like everything though! I'm working on the next one. Thank you for this sweet note! ☺️

I’ve never commented before but just wow. I was purposely not reading this story because I didn’t think it would interest me at all, but I finally broke down and it is by far my favorite thing from you that I have ever read. I usually hate when Lena or Kara romantically interact with other characters but your amazing writing has made me so completely invested in Lucy and Lena having a thing. I can’t even put into words how much I’m enjoying every single aspect of this story! I almost wish I never started it because having to wait for updates just might kill me. Thank you for sharing your talent! 😌

Thank you, thank you! The awkwardness level is definitely rising between them, though maybe acting on their shared feelings will break that. Kara either has no clue or she suspects or who knows... ! Shenanigans are most likely ahead though. ☺️

The stakes are getting a bit higher now. ☺️ Thank you!! I'm looking forward to writing the next chapters. 💙

Yeah, they just complicated things by fooling around, and there are a lot of options and possible ways I can take it now. ☺️ The next several chapters will give you a clear idea of where the story is headed.

Lol, yeah, Kara succeeded in actually teaching her something about soccer! Lena definitely has it in her to hang with the alphas. ☺️ She's working out her attractions and figuring herself out. The confessions/discussions were important, since now we know Kara likes Lena for Lena. Kara should be noticing a lot of things (or lack thereof)... not to mention different pheromones, but Lena did immediately take back control of the situation. Kara probably wouldn't have noticed a blue elephant dancing around the room while Lena was doing all of that. 👀 Thank you!!

Thank you! I'm looking forward to that part as well. ☺️ I don't think they're frowned on, but they are less common, though of course Lena and Kara will be awkward about all of this anyway - because they're roommates and soccer buddies, and just generally have a lot of sexual tension that they can't handle in any universe ever.

Lena the soccer star. I loved the humor. Putting the peppermint in her mouth while it was still wrapped was hilarious. I loved the sex. Keep the sex coming please. Kara has to know that Lena is either an Omega or a Eunuch with nothing getting hard between her legs. I do hope Kara knows. It will be fun watching her try to keep Lena’s secret around the team.

Jbzq21

Woah?! Now things are getting interesting. The smut was 🔥. Lena really is great with dirty talking. Thanks and can't wait see what comes next. ❤❤

Wow things are getting interesting. I can’t imagine it’ll be super smooth sailing if they continue to fool around and Lena won’t let Kara touch her. Kara might think she’s pushing herself onto Lena. Even if Lena is packing Kara will probably notice she doesn’t get hard and with Lena being interested in Lucy, I can see Kara pulling away. Too many possibilities.

Rocket

Lena’s becoming quite the little alpha huh!! Good for her!! Well in the sense that it’s cute she has friends and is at least is coordinated enough to no longer embarrass herself on the field lol. My face legit went :D :D :D at Lena realizing she liked kissing Lucy AND Kara. And Kara just being straight out with the confession!! We love to see it! Also I don’t remember but is Lena packing at all to help with her disguise? I kept waiting for Kara to notice the lack of something but I suppose she was very busy and very distracted during it all. Wonder if things will be revealed at the party!! Great chapter loved the humor in this one

fable

God this is so good. I cannot WAIT for Kara to find everything out, it's gonna be b e a u t i f u l. Also i missed it if it's already been said, but are alpha/alpha relationships frowned upon in that school?


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