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Give me an O - Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2022-08-22 20:48:01 +0000 UTC

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I do enjoy your writing (especially the humour), I just wish I wasn’t a weird who can’t read Alpha/Top Kara. It’s so silly. On a brighter note, according to DC lore, today, 22nd September is Supergirl’s birthday 😃

There is actually a growing demand for Alpha Lena stuff. I'm just starting to see more prompts rolling in for it, and I assume as I post more Alpha Lena stuff on ao3, I might see more people send in prompts, etc. Though I'd encourage you to do whatever makes you happy! Give me an O will be updated every month and there will be another specific Alpha Lena poll either this month or next.

I’m not judging your way of writing - I’d struggle posting regular updates, even if I was only working on one fic 🤣🤣 I might have to peace out soon as it seems 98% of the people here prefer Alpha/Top Kara, which they are totally entitled to, but it’s not my jam 😞

Not far off from it. I've been working on Chapter 5 along with BOE and a few other updates. I write in a nonlinear way that would probably drive most people insane, but that's how I can manage multiple things at once. ☺️

New Chapter? 🥺

Thank you!! I'm thoroughly enjoying writing this one! I've figured out the path to take and I'm working on the next update. ☺️

I love this story! I could go for Plan A or B. There's not doubt both options will be great reading. And, I LOVED the humor in this chapter.

Thank you for the input! I had some more ideas and I've started working on the next chapter. There will be more softness and fluff, and possible drama will have a purpose if it arises.

This Kara is definitely on the softer side when it comes to talking during intimate moments. 😊

That's awesome, I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter! Kara and Lena are undergoing several developments, and this chapter went a little differently than maybe I planned, but I think if any drama arises from this point on, it's important that Lena is acknowledging her feelings. I also wanted Kara to have that awareness because she's pretty smart. ☺️Always delighted to hear when something in the story makes you laugh! Thank you!

I think there might be a few ways to do both. I appreciate the input. I'm enjoying this story too and I'm not ready for it to end. ☺️ Thank you!

I’ve done it again! Crap! I’ve just noticed I could have deleted the other comments lol. I want to vote for Plan/Option B - I want the fic to remain soft and fluffy 🥰

Gah! I pressed send too soon again! Lol!

Pressed send too soon lol! I also love how cute Kara is during sex (especially when she says “Oh gosh”. It was nice seeing Lena reassure Kara that she does find her sexy.

I read this as soon as it was posted (surprise surprise), but didn’t have the time to comment. I really liked this chapter. We are seeing more of Lena and Kara’s character developing. Lena has gone from resisting her feelings to now somewhat embracing them. Although she is still a trusting dork, I’m glad Kara is more clued up than we initially thought she was. As always, I love the humour in this fic. I laughed out loud at this part: It felt too intimate in a room with her squad, and Lena’s hands were already clammy. She snorted at the compliment like it meant nothing and sighed, “Yeah, no shit, tell me something I don’t know.” “I’m not wearing any underwear,” Kara calmly informed her, so soft and sweet that her voice was barely above a whisper. Lena’s alpha reacted and she practically leaned in to yell in Kara’s face, “WHAT?”

i mean im all for a little angst and drama. I also just REALLY love this version of them and would like some more. So im all for plan A but i know regardless of the route you go itll be great

Plan B

I like the softer, happier ending. Lena has changed so much. She deserves a softer,happier ending.

Thank you! She is, and it was probably as instant as Kara's love for her. ☺️ That could actually be the case. I think it will depend if I give everyone the dramatic ending (which will extend the fic by quite a few chapters) or a softer and happier ending. 👀

This was a great chapter. Lena loves Kara so much. Probably the first time anyones ever told Lena they believe in her. I know it’s about to get nasty for Lena but Kara will be by her side the whole time and will love her.


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