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Sparks Will Fly - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2022-09-21 19:55:38 +0000 UTC

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I think this might be the only one of my fics where Sam is an alpha. Hmm, I'll have to explore her as an alpha in some other stories now. Alex is in the next part. 🙂 That's good imagining because I think that's basically what Edge does, maybe with the addition of some landscaping so it looks like he has a reason to be outside when he's just spying on his neighbors. Thank you! I'm very glad you're enjoying the stories. I've been writing on a daily basis for a long time, so it's practically a tick now. 😂😭 In all honesty, it's everyone here that keeps me going.

Ohhh you changed it up and made Sam an Alpha I'm interested to see if Alex is an Omega then or just to see who you pair them up with. Also, I just imagined Edge as this crust old man that just people watches all day. All your work is amazing. I don't know how you do it but thank you for it.

That's true..I feel like Edge just said that !! just to get an reaction out of Lena...Hahaha right he probably also kind of put two and two together and was Like " well there's one missing " it do be nosey neighbors like that 😩 I use to have one Just like Edge 👀 Loved how you said It would be fun to have Alpha competitiveness ummm yes and yes. Oh most definitely, we know Lena made her choice there is no doubt but can we blame her 😏 no we cannot cause 😮‍💨 I would have done the same ! Awww. Liam I feel you on that one yes I do believe he has formed an attachment, especially to Kara a special bond is what they have already formed

Rocket

Oh I’m so here for the dead wife complexities lol. Mostly cause I’m curious on the HOW and if Lena and/or Liam will find themselves in a situation similar for Kara to rescue and heal from 😈😇

Thank you very much!! It won the multi-chapter poll. ☺️

Aww, awesome, it always makes me happy when the person who gives me the prompt is happy with the outcome. ☺️ There's one part that I didn't get to yet (which is "Kara has a reputation as a player") but it'll be addressed! Thank you!! I don't know why Edge popped into my head for this prompt, except I didn't want Lena to be the one repeatedly calling the fire department... and then it just made a lot of sense to include him.

Thank you!! ☺️ I had fun starting this one, looking forward to writing the rest!

Maybe he didn't even see anything, but he knows Kara went inside and didn't come out with the other firefighters, haha. Thought it would be fun to have a little alpha competitiveness in this one! Lena definitely made her choice though. But like, she thought it would be a one time thing. Could be that Liam is already forming an attachment! ☺️

Thank you!! 😁 I could just see him casually doing some landscaping and waiting to talk sht. 😂

No regrets. ☺️ Kara would totally fit right into one of those buff firefighter thirst posts. I was actually thinking of making this slow burn, then went "nah" - and yeah, Sam's an alpha for once! And not Lena's BFF. I do really enjoy writing Sam. In reality, that condom probs would have come off, but that would have haunted Lena into probably not putting out for the other 3 parts of this fic and we can't have that, can we? 😂 One of my friends read this first and she was like "WTF dead wife? Thanks, Satan" but I wanted to add some complexities for Kara and all of that. Thank you!!!

Yeah he does. 😅 Jaded but falling hard and thinking of Kara as someone with friend-only potential.

That's awesome! Thank you! 😁

Thank you! Figured this Lena should be more of a guarded loner than BOE Lena or something. Change things up a bit with the MILF theme. 😁Glad that made you laugh!! Didn't know if I'd make this slow burn or have them jump right into it, and of course I went with the latter. You'll find out more about Kara's widow status in the next part. Yep, Edge is a perv. I made him a nice person in Satisfaction Guaranteed because I made him terrible here. 😂

omg love this new story :)) great concept

loved this so much. kara is just such a gentle yet hott soul and everything lena wants and needs to make her family complete. i like that lena is a bit timid about kara’s intentions. also mom lena is so cute, liam is adorable. Im glad that their first date is something that includes him as well. i cant wait to see what happens at the fair. Also edge is a complete creep. im not going to lie, i watch way too many crime docs that my mind went to “this man probably sneaks into their house when theyre out” because of his voyeur nonsense.

I loved everything about this! Awkward Lena, the kiddo, the firefighters fighting for her attention, and especially Kara bringing breakfast back!

“ you climbed her , like a tree last night “ I just knew that creep was Watching I loved the the Peacocking Kara was doing !! Cause I mean it’s Kara and then her and Sam 🤣 Lena went after what she wanted and that was a tall blonde firefighter 😏 can we blame Lena !!! And then Kara with Liam Safe to say She is his favorite as well 👀💕😮‍💨

That was soooo goooooood. Until Edge had to open his fuckin mouth. 🤣

Rocket

You’re gunna make me have a weakness for firefighters if you keep this up! Kara in uniform 😍 I don’t blame Lena one bit for tapping that hose lol. I loved Sam and Kara’s little rivalry! Granted I love the way you write Sam so I’m just always happy to see her regardless. All the talk about how small a fit that condom was I was worried they’d spring a leak but seems we’re safe for now! And Kara so confident and secure but so cute with the blushing. Sad about her late wife though :( sounds like they’re both the family they always wanted! Loved this can’t wait to see where this goes!

Sappho82

Morgan needs to be punched in the mouth! I love that Lena is all jaded but falling for Kara ❤️❤️❤️

Loving this! Thanks for sharing ;)

This is such a sweet yet hot story. Lena’s resistance to Alphas is about to get seriously tested.LMAO at Lena’s “problems in the bedroom”. statement. Hot,hot sex. Then returning with breakfast a few hours later. Sooo sweet. Liam seems to really like Kara. So that’s good. I do wonder why Kara is a widow. I’m wondering if it has something to do with childbirth?? BTW Mr.Edge is a pervert 😡. Loved the line “the only bush he would be touching” 😝


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