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The Beauty of Experience - Chapter 25

🕑 Added 2022-09-28 23:05:37 +0000 UTC

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oh wow, it just keeps getting better and better huh? i’m glad we got that well-deserved smackdown for andrea + her pulling herself out of her ass to start being a good parent. i might have teared up on some parts and awwed at some fluff parts ft. our fave couple couple but really the best part is everyone going at the most awkward family vacation that seemed to work out somehow. the last part where lena promised getting married to kara despite not getting it right the first time around made me believe that indeed with luck and the universe backing you up, good karma will come for you. gosh, i’m going to miss this fic should it end! do you have an outline when it would, btw? also, are we getting a chapter with kara’s pov bc that would br awesome!

There's more to come, especially when it's Andrea/Lena/Kara on their own. 😉 Andrea was a bit shellshocked. More reaction from her in the next one, plus a lot to come with reacting to Sophia. ☺️

ToK

Well, that was…anticlimactic. I was expecting tears, snarls, violence and sooo much drama ! I’m almost disappointed… I mean, we got a bit of Andrea’s typical behavior of name calling and victim blaming/shaming, but otherwise that was rather… tame. I wanted her to be teared to pieces, and for her kids (especially Sophia) to see her for who she truly is because they deserve to know, but maybe that’s just me being a vindictive bitch 😋 Though I got the sense (hope) that we haven’t seen the last of her reactions considering Sophia’s status as an omega…

Totally, Bernardo wasn't the best or most present father. He didn't cope well with the loss of Andrea's mother. In his mind, I'm sure he believed he was doing the right thing. It's completely possible that from his POV he did -his best- but maybe it wasn't what Andrea needed. And maybe she's also just throwing stones because it's easier than taking the blame for her own actions. Andrea's issues with omegas stem more from the -other omegas- that Bernardo brought into her life after the passing of her mother. Andrea will eventually offer up more of an explanation for why she did what she did, which will probably be of interest in making sense of it all. (Not that there's any justifying it). In my view, people can either handle their generational trauma by fully rejecting the behaviors of their parents or copying them to some degree. That's a valid thought, given how she's behaved. Thank you! There are a few big family moments coming up and that will eventually be one of them. ☺️

I read this as Bernardo failing as a father. He wasn’t there for Andrea after her moms death and continued his pushing into the deep end to learn to swim method of parenting. It makes sense he’d believe Lena given that he barely knows his daughter. It sort of makes sense that instead of rejecting his behavior, Andrea began to emulate him. I still think it’s very weird that she treasured her mother so much yet she had no qualms treating Lena like sh*t. I’m probably the rare breed. Anger at her mother for being weak and putting up with her cheating dad would have been a better explanation. Like it shows her how weak omegas are just to take that rather than her loving her omega mother and hating her father for cheating so she copied him? Not trying to tell you how to write of course! Just expressing myself. I still immensely dislike Andrea for all she’s done no matter what. I adhere to my belief that Andrea never truly loved Lena as a person but more as a status symbol that solidified her status as an alpha. Great work! Looking forward to next month so I can read what happens next! Are Lena and Kara gonna tell the girls about their little sister? So excited!

Thank you!! Kara has a handle on the situation now and Andrea has no choice but to accept the fact that they're in each other's lives. It's a work in progress for them all. Aha, there's more domesticity coming. IT IS very soap opera-y, you're right about that. It could go on for a while, interest permitting. ☺️ 💙

Thank you!! ☺️I spent a considerable amount of time on the interactions and dialogue, and on weaving together all of the important things that had to come together here. This felt like a very important part of the story and I didn't want to mess it up. I'm over the moon that you enjoyed everything about it! 😁

They make a very good team. One of the main things I love about this ship. They're always on the same side, even when they're struggling to communicate or at odds with each other. There's still a love underlying all of that. ☺️ Thank you!! 💙

I know her behaviors are terribly toxic, but I still care about Andrea as a character and her trajectory and how Kara's going to handle the situation with her. ☺️ I'm excited for that, too! Thank you!

I def. tried to make the toxic behavior stuff as realistic as possible. Yeah, I wasn't sure how the conversation between them would go down at first, and if Bernardo would be a bit more sympathetic to his daughter, but I feel he knows Andrea and what she's capable of doing. Maybe he isn't fully taking sides, but just showing her some tough love right now so she'll do better by her family. I still see the potential for a long story ahead and I have a bunch of plans for developing it as such. If at any point there's a substantial loss of interest, I could truncate it. I'm on part 2 of what I view as 3 arcs. Lena & Kara are mated but not married. In this verse I've made them separate things. Marriage is an extra form of commitment. You'll see them again soon! And Nia, too! Good things ahead for Nia. ☺️

I'm so excited for the things I have planned for Kara in the next several chapters! Kara's interactions with Bernardo took some thought and consideration.... I wanted the dialogue to be decent and real and complex, at least as much as possible. It's the main reason it took me a little longer with the chapter, since so many important things came together here. 😁 Happy you laughed in the middle of the tension! Oh yeah, Andrea 100% believed Lena was still hers, even after the claim. The kids & Andrea still have things to work through, and there's more family stuff coming up! Thank you!!! ❤️

So you're on the same page as Lena. ☹️

Thank you! 😁

There's a lot of plot happening in this chapter, too! Thank you, I'm glad you like it all! ☺️

Oh wow. This is EVERYTHING. Granted, Andrea might still try a few shady moves in retaliation but hot damn. This may have been the best form of karma for Andrea in this story. Like it doesn't excuse her shit but in a way it kinda gave everyone perspective. I am now ready for more domestic Kara and Lena. Have I told you how much I love this story? This is like my fanfic soap opera. I don't care how long it runs so long as it does. 😂😍🎉

WOW!! What a awesome chapter. WOW. There is so much info and emotion in it. I can’t even begin to point out all the things I loved about this chapter. I loved every word and interaction between the characters. You did a fantastic job of putting so much in this chapter. Every thing was Very well written and explained. So Super Kudos to you. 👏👏👏👏

I've said it before, but I'll say it again. I love how open and honest Kara and Lena's relationship is. No matter what they face, I'm not worried if they'll separate, I know they'll face it together. Awesome update! Thanks for sharing ;)

I know we all love to hate Andrea but I do hope she can get her shit together and co-exist with Kara! I love the plot! Bernardo was a treat! I can’t wait until they tell the whole family Lena’s pregnant!

Some perfect real life examples in this chapter of toxic behaviour and hhow some either accept and repeat or reject and learn to be better. Love Kara's honesty and chat with Bernardo but he also shocked me in a way with believe Lena right away just about without even talking to his how daughter. Curious to see what the next chapter will bring and also where do you see this series ending? They already are mated and had a wedding (right?) Lena is preggers is it going to end in the delivery room or before/after. I want to see more Alex/sam and Ruby. Also please give Nia someone who will put her first!

Rocket

Bookended this one with just heart growing two sizes at Kara honestly 🥺🥺. Love love LOVE Kara and Bernardo facing off like that and Kara giving as good as she gets. We all love Kara and future father-in-laws are no exception. And holy cow Andrea finally gets what for! That argument was so tense and revealing about Andrea’s character I definitely was holding my breath the whole time (although did laugh at Kara’s “yeah and I’m about to [hit her] again” dunno why but that got me good)! Definitely says something than the thing that made it “real” for Andrea was the news of the new pup but I suppose it just matters that it happened. The kids in this one were a DELIGHT too! Always love Natty and nothing says stubborn like a 16 year old with a point to prove! Hopefully Sophia comes back from her night out with Andrea ok. Ugh I love this family I love this story so MUCH!!! 🥺🥺

Sappho82

The screaming match between Andrea and Bernardo and Kara high-key stressed me out 😫

I freaking love this

I initially came for the smut. 1000% stayed for the plot. Hot damn!


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