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Fighting Fire with Fire

🕑 Added 2022-08-30 00:08:47 +0000 UTC

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I Definitely enjoy your stories. I can tell it was fun...who doesn't love extreme Jealous Lena I can tell she was fun to write !!! that's true it was different but a good different. that's something to think about in Sex and Suburbs That Lena you can tell has a little more Tolerance but to an extant....Hahaha that's what I loved Jenna got Checked and it was so satisfying 😩✨🤣 I can't wait to see what you come with next...I'm looking forward to all the stories you come up 💜

To be clear, I definitely liked the story and Jenna being over the top and irrationally fixated was 100% what it needed. I just couldn't help thinking "Jenna are you okay this isn't normal post-rescue behavior" because her behavior just seemed so fixated and manic. That doesn't mean she needs sympathy/empathy in this story, *especially* given her actions, but I thought it was an interesting way of looking at why she did what she did.

That image totally came to me right away and that was the primary reason I went with Kara's POV for this one. ☺️ Lena seems fully prepared to accept the challenge of keeping all of the ladies off of Kara for the rest of their lives. I'm happy the story made you laugh! I worried it would turn out to be a more serious story from Kara's POV and that it would be more comedic from Lena's - Thank you!!! 💙

Lmao, I'm so happy you love my stories and that you think they're amazing. It was fun writing this -- and Lena's more extreme jealous reaction was a bit different than her usual passive aggressive/more tolerant(?) approach. I don't know, maybe she's not that tolerant in things like Sex in the Suburbs. But yeah, Jenna was feeling Lena's wrath 💯 Thank you!! I'm working on a lot of stuff that I'm very excited about and you won't have to wait too long.

Haha, don't we all? ☺️💙

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I'm really happy you enjoyed the execution of your prompt!! 😁I wavered over whether to write it from Kara's POV or Lena's, but in the end I was feeling Kara more for this one.

Since we've had a lot of jealousy-trope stuff, I wanted to change things up and make the character super over the top. The prompt called for the woman to have a crush and start hanging around the fire house -- so I saw her as being a more forward kind of character than usual. This time I also wanted Lena to be straight up possessive, and that required Jenna to be openly and excessively thirsty so Lena could defend her territory. If Jenna had been anything less, it would've been kinda on the cruel side for Lena to jump right into jealousies/possessive behavior (and she probably would have had some doubts about Jenna's intentions).

Rocket

Listen I know we’re all here for Sexy Firefighter Kara (as we should be!!) but also the image of tiny Kara in clunky boots putting out fires with her cute bangs and missing teeth is too much I tell you. Lena’s gunna have to beat these ladies off with a stick!! Poor Kara so uncomfy but also I laughed very hard at all the shenanigans. I hope they start a family full of little firefighters and nurses. And good thing Lena can always play doctor if the need arrives 😉. Loved this!!

Here’s my reason, Why I fall in love with your stories so much !! Create amazing Sh** ( scuse my language ) like this I was ready for Lena 😩to defend her territory and by that I mean Kara Baby girl Jenna didn’t know what was about to hit her & Those Other Omega’s 👀 I feel like The full wrath of Lena Luthor * not Danvers * was about to show them who was boss 😩✨💕 as always beautifully written story You know me I stay falling for every single last one of them I can’t wait to see what you come up with next

I love jealous,no panty wearing, horny as hell Lena. 🔥🔥🔥

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Leena

Ah I love this!! Thank you so much for going above and beyond my expectations for this prompt when I suggested it! Thanks for sharing :)

All through this story I legit thought Jenna was having some sort of post-trauma episode, because her first thought after being rescued from *almost dying* was single-mindedly pursuing adultery with the person who rescued her.


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