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Disobedience and Devotion [Sequel] - Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2022-11-16 22:50:03 +0000 UTC

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Just looked back at this chapter and saw your comment. Finally updated this story and I'm sad it took a while but I'm happy with the outcome since it's a pivotal moment. Thank you and I'm happy you enjoyed this one.

Ashley

Just got here, binged the whole series in 48 hours and I (like Lena) am desperate for more!!! 😍😍

That's awesome. ☺️ I'm very glad you're enjoying all of them!

I'm reading everything hahaha it's just so good to read your stories

Thank you for the feedback on this! ☺️❤️ I have other chapters in mind and I'm glad there's enough interest to warrant continuing it.

Thank you! Wow, you read all of the chapters to this story very fast! It's wonderful to hear it elicited emotions and that it had you rooting for Kara and Lena to fix everything!

Wow, thank you!! I really love writing these sort of ABO-ified historical pieces. ☺️

Oh, wow, that's really cool! How'd you find out about it? I do have plans for more of this one. The story means a lot to me personally, but I wanted to ask everyone's opinions. ☺️ Thank you so much!

This was definitely a chapter just to focus on them still bickering a bit but also appreciating each other and the couple they've become. Lena would get grumpy anyway, I'm afraid. 😂 Henshaw's a big part of this sequel and I'm excited for that story line. It does make sense wanting it as a back-burner piece, especially since I hadn't continued it for a bit. I may add another chapter next month or in January because I feel like the season is inspiring me, but we'll see. The pace of this chapter is slower and more character-focused. The next one would bring some more plot into it. Thank you!!

Aww, that's amazing to hear! Especially that it's something you'd re-read. Working on BOE today! 😁 Thank you!

Thank you, I'm delighted you enjoyed it! ☺️

Thank you! I have another 6 chapters of the sequel mapped out in my head, but I didn't know if people still wanted to see more in this verse.

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback!

I really enjoy this story especially the growth between Kara and Lena’s relationship. I would definitely enjoy and appreciate it if this story was continued on occasion 👍🏻💙❤️

Please continue! This story writing is so clever and the characters are so real. I feel emotional reading it, rootig for Kara and Lena to make the world they live in a better place.

I love this world. It made me feel like I'm in Emily Dickinson's time

this au is what first inspired me to become a patreon subscriber—please please continue

Rocket

I love the rapport they’ve settled into now that they understand each other. And I bet Lena wishes she could blame pregnancy hormones for getting all grumpy with past Kara but we all know that’s just how Lena is 😂 good thing Kara knows when it’s worth a fight now it seems! I’m still endlessly curious at Henshaw’s game in this - I can’t tell yet if he’s friend or foe so I’m just majorly side-eyeing while enjoying the romp. And what a romp indeed! I have a special soft spot in my heart for this story but I do kinda like it as back-burner treat if that makes sense? I love this world and their dynamic but admittedly it doesn’t quite feel like it’s got the same pace going as some of your others atm. But of course I’m never ever going to tell you to stop 😝😅 just maybe a good simmer while we wait on the twins.

I will never stop loving this universe! Re-read the first one just this weekend and I will forever love them on this (even if right now I’m still on edge for BoE cliffhanger)

Awesome update! Thanks for sharing ;)

Excellent story please continue. At least until the babies are born

Please continue! This is such a good AU.


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