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The Beauty of Experience - Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2023-01-15 03:57:51 +0000 UTC

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My angel... (sorry if this statement seems too personal or intimate, I'm Brazilian and it's customary in my country to call people that) I would have a syncope of happiness if BOE was one of those stories with two hundred chapters, you can be sure that I would read them all, and probably read them again until I memorized every comma. So DON'T YOU DARE finish BOE. But if it's a constructive criticism, I'm missing an anguish there in the middle of this incredible story. For example, I'm dying to know who this mystery woman from Kara's messages is. In my imagination I think that at some point (thanks to an unfortunate but inconveniently convincing event with this woman) Lena would give in to years of insecurity built by Andrea along with the combo shock that the girls would have to have an extra sister or brother. Far from asking for the story to happen like this, but I, at least as a reader (and writer too) miss it somewhat so I would love to know what you think about my point of view. again: You are awesome!

Lmao. Lena would appreciate the assistance, I'm sure. Andrea tries, fails, tries and fails... but maybe *some day* she'll experience some growth. Maybe. They could also be Andrea's insecurities, which she's passing on to the kid who she sees as her mini-me. It's terribly wrong either way, and yes she needs therapy. All of the therapy. 😂

Yeah, Andrea is still not handling co-parenting well. *Parenting* in general, for that matter. LMAO about Andrea's junk getting bitten off by a shark. Gisela might rip it off first. They won't reach Strike 3 in the next chapter, but Lena and Kara are going to have some very fun and happy moments and I'm excited to share that. 😁

Thank you!! ☺️ Is it sad that I could probably write a million chapters of any one of my stories? Sometimes I do worry if peoples' interest is waning. I know some would like the story to end, and I plan to write other things for them, but it makes me happy to know that you're still really enjoying it. Andrea is probably having *a lot* of thoughts right now. The next one should be interesting and give you some of the things you want. 😂 Yay for Sophia having realisations about her sire! Thank you - you are awesome and I appreciate your sweet words!

bruh, i wish i could jump into this story and knock andrea's ass out. she is truly the worst. just when you think (or stupidly hope) that she might actually be getting it and becoming an actual adult, she goes right back to doing this toxic, dumb shit. the fact that she plays on sophia's insecurities, especially, re: kara "replacing" the girls with her own biological kids is so gross (but totally in character.) she needs a new, better therapist; maybe even an inpatient program.

I can just picture Andrea poisoning the children's minds into thinking Kara will no longer care for them when her real pups arrive. Could Strike 3 have something to do with that? I really want Kara and Lena to have a happy life together as we read it unfold throughout the years and for Andrea to find a new omega to obsess about and leave all of them alone (kids included) if her junk isn't going to get bitten off by a shark...

Wow! This chapter was wonderful! And that ending then... I don't want this story to end EVER! After that, me and Andrea's call would enter into a dialogue (or a reflection) on something like "she was never like that with me in sex, not even in our best years" . I'm looking forward to a chapter where she finally has the epiphany that she screwed up her daughters' relationship (because Lena is fucking great, thank you) I would also love to see Kara smack Andrea's ass again. Like…being spanked like shit, and Andrea seeing that she wouldn't be an alpha like Kara even if she was born again. Lastly: I am so happy that Sophia is finally seeing Andrea for who she really is: a heartless scoundrel, you and your writing are amazing!

Yeah, strike 3 should be a very interesting time. 😂 She is totally reaping it this day.

Can't wait for Strike 3, I feel it will be entertaining as hell! That ending though! Reap what you sow, Andrea hahahah

Oh yeah. 😂

GrouchyGritic

Karma!

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Yeah, Sophia had a self aware moment! Lillian's kind of old fashioned in her approach here, and Andrea definitely had a habit of cheating on Lena during her pregnancies. Andy had a rough day and acted badly - but yes, siblings do know how to strike at the weak spots! Thank you! ☺️

I might have thought about it too as I was writing that part. 😂

It was a very bad day, indeed. Three is a bit more verbal and stubborn, but two can involve biting. All in all, I don't know what's preferable from a parenting POV. Natty has a big personality, and I don't think she's going to easily forget about the mermaid who hated her & Andrea. Maybe overall I wanted to show that Andy was capable of going off and isn't just the perfect kid of the family, and Sophia for once was more mature in her approach. Of course it's not bad that you're excited for that! 😂 We'll see when and if Andrea gets there. Thank you!!! ❤️

Oh, there are more lessons to be learned! 😂 Many more. The whole premise of the chapter was basically like, "what if everything went wrong in a day?" That's pretty true regarding Natty! She has reached a stage where she's comfortable, and also high emotions were involved because mermaids. I could just see her getting beaten down while standing in line. I have some particular plans for Kara and Lena in the next one, and there will be some family moments, although Chapter 29 is going to revolve mainly around L+K. There's a lot of Kara parenting ahead in general though! It's not a lot, and I love hearing from you. 😁💙 Thank you and I will be working on the next part along with a lot of other updates!!

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Lol I'm looking forward to how they're going to handle it with Andrea in the next one. 😁 It'll certainly be an adjustment for the kids, even if they like the idea. You're probably right about Lillian. She's kind of old fashioned in this one. 😂 Most likely not the first time Andrea's gotten that from an ex. Thank you!

WAIT 🤣

Oh I am glad to see that Sophia is aware enough and mature a enough to recognise Andreas toxic behaviour. Also WTF with Lillian!? That felt very OOC did Andrea get in her head somehow? I know Andy has seen Andrea as not a good parents and wants Sophia to also be aware but oof at her approach. I guess that’s the things with siblings though. They know how to tear away all the armour and the weakest spot to hit for maximum damage.

Lmao😂 girl I thought you were gunna kill someone in the archery scene😂😭

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WHAT A DAY!! I’ve never understood why they call it the terrible twos - three year olds have the best time of knowing “no” and combining it with personality 😂 poor Natty at least it’ll be a fun story in the future. And poor Lena what a morning! One two punch with her kids and Lillian all in ten minutes. Kara and Bernardo really coming to the rescue over and over and Andrea’s learning! Lol kinda. I wonder if Andy’s grumpy at something on her phone or if Sophia just caught her on a bad day but I love that Sophia’s coming around!! is it bad I’m excited for Andrea’s third strike?? Definitely hot for Andrea getting the eyeful and confirmation Kara’s giving it better than she ever could though!! Gosh what a chapter you just get better and better

I did not expect the ending. 🥹🤣🤣🤣🤣 But damn. That oughta teach Andrea a thing or two. 😂 I really love Kara's slow but steady growth in terms of her relationship with the children and her growing into her own parenting skills. I laughed when it was obvious some of the "honeymoon phase" with Natty looked to be over and Kara was now being subjected to the uh less fun aspect of parenting. I guess it speaks volumes to the kids' comfort level with Kara. Like maybe they are more confident that Kara's there to stay as another parent. Don't get me started at the entertainment that was Andrea and the mermaids. 🤣 I'd love to see perhaps a family day or two with just Kara, Lena, and the kids. Or maybe a chance for Kara to spend some one on one time with either Andy or Sophia to get more insight into how much of a positive influence/effect Kara's brought into the family dynamic as a whole. I'm sorry if that's a lot. I just really love this story and as you can see from my comment, I'm in too deep 🤣. But thank you and I hope to read more chapters on this as soon as you're able. ♥️😁

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Take that Andrea 😆 I seriously doubt the kids will have a problem with having another sibling. Andy and Sophia will just adjust to the idea. Natty will be a proud big sister. Lillian is another thing. She'd want for Lena to be married first to be pregnant. Well too bad 🤪 Lol for Andrea and Gisela. Thanks for a great chapter.


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