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The Alpha Next Door - Part 2

🕑 Added 2023-02-26 21:59:07 +0000 UTC

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I'm happy you enjoyed that part. ☺️ Thank you!

Christ, the blanket scene. That's the funniest thing I've ever read!

Thank you! It's a fine line, but she's definitely stepped over it several times and maybe there's no going back now. I feel like Lena's rivalry with Alex might grow a bit more, and Kara will playfully side with her. Yeah, their future living arrangements will be interesting! I'm not sure what would happen there yet. A little nod to Supergirl - Kara has a blanket cape. 😁 But not the dodging skills.

Thank you for the nice comments! I hoped to make this comedic and light enough while also dealing with some more serious themes. It's fun writing Ruby with Lena (since Lena is her mom but also not, and sometimes makes questionable parenting choices). Lena has a lot of emotions to navigate and I definitely want to write a part 3 to cover that progression. 😁

Yeah, there's more backstory for all of them which would be good to cover in a part 3. Sam has a better outlook in a lot of ways than I think Lena does, which will make sense whenever I write more and a little bit more backstory can be explored. ☺️ I'm happy you enjoyed the Alex and Sam interactions - I really wanted more of that in part 1 and will def. include more in a future part 3. Thank you!

Thank you!!! Haha, Ruby is a free thinker, but I'm sure she's going to be less adventurous next time. A double wedding would be cute! 😁

Thank you!! I really love the different dynamics here, too. ☺️

She's gonna fight those feelings tooth and nail. ☺️ At least this Kara is very patient. I think there's so many opportunities to explore some interesting dynamics here because of the platonic love between Sam and Lena - and how they'll co-parent while developing relationships with their neighbors. It's possible Sam will have certain feelings in response to Ruby going off with Lena and Kara at some point. Single omega Eliza raised two considerate & competitive alphas. I came up with a bit more backstory for Sam and Lena before writing this one, and yeah, when I explore this one further in a part 3, it'll involve Lena working on some deeper trust issues. But also lighter moments, so this doesn't become too heavy. It'll be fun to write Ruby spouting out the pieces of advice her parents have given her over the years. Definitely a big change, but Ruby's probably the most receptive of them all. Thank you!! I really would love to write more for this one. I hope you enjoy re-reading!

Rocket

I love the careful line Lena’s walking here. So obviously falling yet wanting to be so in denial at the same time. Them teaming up against Alex was VERY CUTE and I love Alex and Sam bonding 🥹 Ruby’s gunna grow up in a two household family but in the best way???? Two bedrooms full of toys ready for tea parties in her future I can see it. I DIED at Kara throwing the blanket over her shoulder what a DORK! Same with Lena beaning her right in the head. Definitely gotta sign up for self defense Kara you’ll need the practice 😂😂

betty

thank you for the update, author-san! i thought this was a very fun continuation to the first chapter. ruby doing stellar work just by existing, remains one of the best in the story! lol great to see some progression with sam and alex. also fun to see kara just trying her darnedest and lena just honestly in unchartered territory but she's definitely getting lost in the sauce. would love to see their second date and how they progress with true snark and the banter!

I was wondering about Alex and Kara backstory some and we got it :) Happy that Sam is healed enough and willing to take those chances when shown as well. And Lena... Lena Lena Lena SMH it is futile! Kara should make some nerdy remark about that to her if a Ch 3 is ever done. I was just happy to see Alex and Sam having a nice time and interactions with Ruby.

Loved the arcade competition. Ruby’s pizza toppings at the arcade were stomach turning. Do I see a double wedding in the future?? Great story,super great sex🥵

Loving all the dynamics/banter between everyone! Thanks for sharing ;)

It cracks me up when Lena tries to resist how she feels 😂😂 but it’s futile! Look at Kara! The pharmacy scene was funny lol and then the hives, awww Kara and Alex proving that they’re good with kids is such a plus here. And that moment when Alex is like “I’m not stepping on any toes here” is so beautifully reassuring. I wonder if Sam feels any reservations for Kara, even if she’s the one kinda encouraging Lena. Love me some Kara and Alex interaction lol oh and it’s perfect that Eliza is an Omega that raised two Alphas! It makes everything better! Bu this time we know that great, amazing sex is not going to be enough to trust an Alpha (Although it’s certainly helping) Hopefully Lena will see that Kara is kind to everyone, I don’t know, Sam and Alex are so cute here. I hope they hit it off. I see Ruby seems receptive to both Kara and Alex but this is a huge change. Anyway! Great chapter! I enjoyed it! Cannot wait to see what you do next! Now I’m off to read it again!

Well, that's awesome! I'm very happy you liked the banter and background -- haha, Lena has a lot more opening up to do (in all the ways). 😂

I am a speed reader and YES! Loved the banter between Kara and Alex and the light background in the alphas. Looking forward to Lena opening up (well, more than she’s opening up already xD)!

You read it already? 😮 Speed reader!

Just wow


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