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One Wild Night - Part Four

🕑 Added 2023-03-26 13:53:55 +0000 UTC

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It wasn't mine. 😂 Mine was the Jane the Virgin AU but I abandoned it and vote for this prompt instead because I was like "OMG! Hallmark AU!" 🤣

In a line up, they do look similar... 🤓🤓

Wait, Fox, wasn't this your prompt? 😂 Or am I remembering incorrectly?

Rocket

I know I did too! Not me sitting here reading a SuperCorp story going “but what if it IS Felicity?!?!?” 😂

I reread this again and I realized that this chapter's writing was so effective that even I got worried what if the DNA test says Kara isn't the sire. And then I remembered that the story is in dramatic irony setting, where us readers already know Kara is the sire for sure, but the characters don't know. I got worried for nothing 😂

Thank you! 😁

Thank you, I'm happy you liked that part! Yeah, it's about time that everyone at least finds out Lena is pregnant (since she's about to show). Hurting Kara definitely isn't Lena's goal. More developments to come in the next one!

For the laughs and also because Kara gets to flex! But also poor Kara. Yes. I'm sure there's a lot of omegas around town who would love to get with Kara. Alex and Sam have been desperate to set her up for some time. I'm excited to write the next part. ☺️

Mmm I’m just for jealous Lena actually. She’s already pretty much in her head as it is. Adding further chaos would over complicate something that is already complicated as it is. All for the jealousy and omega for the win, is just not the same with Alfa/Alfa and Beta because, if we take the whole class into consideration, Alfa/Omega would be the best pair in any case.

Oh, I do love characters getting a taste of their own medicine (just a little) maybe Kara has a friendly afternoon with an omega/beta or even alpha friend that Lena doesn’t know but sees around town. Kara is of course uninterested, perhaps flattered/flustered if she realizes the other party is interested (omg what if Kara said she was already involved with someone. Lena overhears and jumps through mental hoops to convince herself she’s NOT who Kara’s talking about), but cue insecure/jealous Lena and them finally talking a bit beyond “we’re not dating each other, but we’re not dating anyone else either” I wouldn’t mind some light angst that lasted most of a chapter. Lena wallowing for an afternoon talking to Sam about missing her chance. And this response got way too long…not sorry.

Your humor 🤣 I'm falling off my chair

The Alpha competition was great and funny. I’m glad Sam finally knows. I don’t know how far Lena is in her pregnancy but she has got to let Kara in soon. Her tactics is making for great sex but in the long run it’s hurting Kara. If Kara is the sire she should get to enjoy going through the pregnancy with Lena as a parent not a friend

Ohhh Lena, I love you but I also want to kick your lovely behind sometimes. Poor Kara was exploding with jealousy and for WHAT?? I really need Lena to put on her big girl panties and let Kara in once and for all. Also wouldn’t mind her knowing that there might be other omegas vying for Kara BIG affections.

Yeah, Sam knows! Now she can help Lena or influence her or something. ☺️ Lena's not necessarily insane, maybe just vulnerable. She's probably not someone who planned to have kids or fall in love. And wham, she has a pup on the way and there's Kara, this extremely helpful and loveable dork next door. I had to take the opportunity to include all of the blondes just so Kara could whip out her weight lifting belt and show everyone who's boss. 😂 Lol, yep, Kara skipped a step there! We'll have to see what happens in the next part with Lena's scheming and fears. Thank you!!

Finally Sam knows. Yay! Sometimes I could whack them all over the head because of the stupidity 🙃. As someone else said before, Sam is the only sane one in this I believe. Or is it just hormones? The bunch of alphas you chose cracked me up. Beth Kane? Lol 😆 they all chopping wood was hilarious with Kara wearing her weight lifting belt 🤣 well Lena now has fire wood for a year, a bun in the oven, another ruined table, probably ruined DNA material because of missed time and a big knot inside her. And more mushed (read fucked up) brain so she won't tell Kara of her possible child. Again. But kudos for jealous Kara that gave us another steamy evening 😉 "we're not together officially but you're mine" cracked me up.

ah I had no idea, never seen someone with a belt while lifting furniture but I very much appreciate the visual aspect of it and I'm glad she's taking care of her spine 😂 she needs it in top condition with Lena lol

It's one of those, yes!

More than anything, I hoped everyone would appreciate the "visual" so to speak. 😂

When I first got the prompt, I struggled trying to come up with a reasonable justification that Lena wouldn't know who knocked her up. Costumes with full masks, lots of blondes, alcohol = a perfect mix of chaos. Felicity and Kara have a lot of similar physical traits, so I knew I had to include her. Tbh, Kara lifting a couch and chopping wood was kind of the whole point of the chapter in my mind. 😂 Don't worry, you're going to get read Sam's struggle! It's important that Kara thinks they're just a bunch of random friends, but that would have been nice of Lena to clear that up. Your comments bring me a lot of joy. Thank you!

Geniuses with no common sense and too stubborn or scared to communicate. Let's see what Sam is going to do with her one brain cell. 😁 Thank you!

^ This, totally, 100%. 😂

A perfect theme song. 😂 I'm happy to hear that you found it fun! You've understood completely where I was going with this. Lena is a woman of science and she wants scientific evidence to back up her own hypothesis. Not because she's unsure about her feelings for Kara. Lena knows how she feels (I think), but it's not like Kara has confessed to having feelings, either. She's just made it clear she doesn't want Lena seeing anyone else. That's a fine line distinction, and we all know Kara is in it for the long run, but Lena isn't sure of that. She's pregnant and hormonal and a bunch of other things. And you're right, her control and heart are slipping! Felicity and Kara have a lot of similar physical traits, and I just really liked the idea of Lena gathering all of the blondes together to take their DNA. It's bad, but it's also good, and I did it all for Kara's alpha flexing.  Sam sorta needed to find out at this point. Otherwise she'd just assume that Lena was messing with cinnamon roll Kara and playing a lot of mind games. Now that Lena has the DNA, she can probably get some answers and make some decisions. I'm excited to work on the next chapter and just in general to keep this story going.  At times I really wish I could write both POVs for every story because some interesting things would be going on in Kara's head right now. But the not-knowing is also kinda a wild card that's useful and can be filled in through the plot. I'm sure Kara has *a lot* of emotions and I'm looking forward to exploring those soon through a couple of important convos.  I love reading your thoughts and it made me super happy to get this, so thank you! I'm invested in seeing this one through on a monthly basis because the plot is clear in my head and it's actually helping me pick up with some other stories I had to put down because of the unending supply of amazing prompts. Your kind words are super appreciated. ☺️💙

Yeah she came prepared. Idk if it’s a weight-lifting (exercise) belt though. Before I knew about weightlifting, I knew people in certain jobs like delivery drivers and others where you lift heavy things regularly use a lower back/waist belt when lifting heavy things to help prevent getting hurt

Okay, but Kara bringing her weight-lifting belt to lift furniture ? 😂

Rocket

I LOVED this chapter. Felicity as a sweet alpha is one of my favorite things even if it does mean confusing and stressing poor Kara. But then again it DOES mean imaging Kara lifting a whole couch by herself so I think we’re all winners here. And now Sam knows!! Huzzah!! What I wouldn’t give to watch that struggle of Sam trying not to tell 😂 Lena’s definitely got it bad though and hopefully she fesses up soon! I half expected her to confess why she got all those alphas there but in a vague way? Like allude they had all been at the party or something so Kara wouldn’t be happy but still maybe drew her own conclusions. It all worked out in the end but oh man is Lena running out of runway real fast for all of this. Great chapter

Idiots, the lot of them. Though I'm glad Sam finally knows. Pretty sure she has the groups only brain cell most of the time haha Thanks for sharing ;)

betty

that filter deserves a raise

The filter between Lena’s feelings and what actually comes out her mouth is always working overtime 😂

betty

oh lena *plays usher's u got it bad in the background* i thought the alpha competition was a fun and chaotic part! i was really entertained by the antics, and i thought you did a great job juggling all the characters together. the fact that there could be some competition against kara via felicity is definitely interesting. this story doesn't seem like it'll dip into angst angst but i like the idea of a little jealousy hiccup that spurs a bit of light angst 👀 not necessarily to put lena in her place, but more as a consequence of her scheming if that makes sense. anyway, lena is a woman of science. she's insane for this but i get what she's doing and why. girl gotta hold onto the last vestiges of her control and her heart because it's slipping! i'm glad that lena has finally talked to sam about this though even if it came out more of a confession. i'm super curious how the dynamic will change now that someone else knows about her pregnancy. equally, i'm curious about the DNA test. i feel like the results would truly be a crossroads for her. so far we're basically just assuming that kara is the sire but what if she's not??? can i cope? can lena???? that should be delicious to read when the time comes. it really is amazing that only through their amazing rough sex that lena is pretty much an open book. so i can only imagine the mixed signals that kara is experiencing. she did confess that they're not together but she's not keen on sharing. these two dummies smh LOL anyway i'm so curious as to how kara will be in future parts as the story unfolds considering this part took place literally AFTER they spent the night. that woman must be feeling some things other than lust. anyway i've blabbered on enough! even though you can see i'm invested in the story. i'm excited to see where you continue this and look forward to the next parts. as always, thank you for your hard work! 🙌🏽🤩

NGL. I'm kinda wishing for Kara to accidentally give Lena a dose of her own stupidity 😂. And yes. Accidentally. Because kind Kara could never. 😁

Kara's pretty much at that point. But first they're cuddling on the couch.

Aww, awesome, I'm glad you had the chance to read! Well, Lena did confide in Sam. I don't know if that counts for anything though. She's still determined to figure out who sired her pup first.

One of the few stories where Lena's stubbornness makes me wanna flip a table and take a walk for an hour or two.

What heat timing! Able to read this then head off to sleep. Still no conversations… bloody hell Lena! Get your shot together girl, put on the big girl parties and just say it! Nothing good comes from procrastinating and I would know as a serial one.


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