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L.E.S.B. - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2023-03-29 00:41:40 +0000 UTC

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Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this and delving into a different kind of verse for Alpha Lena/Omega Kara. I felt like this needed more than one chapter to get at the whole dynamic between them and include multiple "kidnapping" moments. It might remain faithful, it might not! You never know. I like to do things differently when I get a prompt for an established thing so that it keeps the story similar but also fresh and different. 😁 Thank you!!

betty

very apt to have lena be the lucy here! their chemistry was amazing and the banter was super fun! the sex scenes were also very hot without becoming too much of one thing or another, so i thought you did a great job striking a balance for the genre this is in! i'll be curious to see how this plays out with your own twist considering it's an established DEBS AU! it obviously is remaining faithful enough and we can all guess how it goes plot-wise, but you always add little stuff here and there to make it different. thank you for this!

Thank you!! More to come. 😁

That's a relief to hear. I really wanted this to be similar but not exactly the same. Thank you!! ☺️

Thank you! There will be more! ☺️

Awesome, so happy to hear you enjoyed it! ☺️ Thank you!

It's always fun to write a movie-type plot and make it different. ☺️ I feel like sometimes writing Alpha Lena is... another character headspace but also not. That probably makes no sense, but it's just an interesting switch up in terms of her flirtation! Lolll @ someone on the inside. You know how to spin a pun. 😂Thank you!!

I'm very happy to hear you loved this! More soon! ☺️

I'm so glad you love it!! ☺️

😁💙❤️

This is great. Can’t wait for the next chapter. 👏👏

DEBS was one of my favorite movies when I was younger. I think you definitely did both the movie and supercorp justice! Good job, I can't wait for the next chapter!

🤣🤣🙌 this was awesome. Hope you can make another chapter.

Loved it! Can’t wait for more!!!

Michelle Sparq

I LOVE this. Excited for more.

Rocket

Golly this was so fun. I could just HEAR that spy-guitar theme music during the whole first half you know? And then Lena so flirty being the anti-hero! Giving me big Selina Kyle/Catwoman vibes honestly I’m so here for it. Sounds like Kara’s got a great future ahead as an agent with “someone on the inside” to help with all those missions WINK WINK lol. Great work this was so so fun

Haven’t started this yet but so excited. Probably a little TOO excited hahaha

Oh I loved DEBS and I already love this.

🥵🥵🥵 Phew. *fans self*


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