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Papermon Journey ROUGH - 2ND DRAFT
🕑 Added 2022-07-06 10:56:52 +0000 UTCWell I listened to your amazing feedback, took it to heart and reshuffled the whole thing so that the highlights section was way more coherent, to the point that I've actually added several new scenes. I will NOT be changing it further (I've put it off long enough, it can't be perfect) but I do still want to make sure you see what you helped make better first! Also you can tell me if there are any technical problems as well.
Enjoy! Once I update and add the patrons, Youtube is next!
Comments
Oliver- Smilliereacts
2 months late but I agree with everyone else, this is the best draft you have done.
LL
I'm very late but I just want to commend the snappiness and timing of the editing in this draft! Perfect!
Suede
Good note, I'll keep it just for now so that those looking for the old "Journey" videos can find it easier, but I might phase it out later as it gets the audience back.
David Gray
This is honestly far better than your previous draft. Sure, you can't use scenes from the anime itself. However, this does feel like you are getting the same point across as you did with the previous PJ. Good work!
Cole Durrett
Suede, my piece of feedback is that I think you should chop off the word "Journey" from the title of this series. "Papermon" is a fun enough title as is, plus I always get confused and think you're talking about Pokemon Journeys the TV series.
Lucas Neumeyer (NEW-my-er)
Typo in the warning section says "How battles differ from the games outside *if* typing"
Death of Ink
That strike at "I choose you!" was wonderful!! XD
This is the BEST version so far! I think you really have something with this format Suede. I can see myself watching all 100+ episodes of Pokémon Journeys like this easily!
