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45 - Dungeon

🕑 Added 2023-06-01 16:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Melting Sky

Just referring to them as goblin woman or goblin man the first time they are referred to in the chapter to set the scene would work.

InLucidReverie

I mean wby wouldn't they use man and woman wjen speaking the same language?

It can work, but I think I just prefer man/woman for males/females of humanoid races. I see it in other stories and I think there's a tacit agreement that while not literally correct, it reads more naturally, so whatever.

RyanTM

Have you tried coming up with your own in universe words? Words the characters would use in their society to describe a male or female goblin? Like maybe they call kids goblits, women goblinette or gobliness, and men goblots?

I personally find male/female to be clunky even if its the correct way to write it, and specifying goblin man or goblin woman to also be awkward. I think it's a no win situation, lol

RyanTM

A few of the early paragraphs make the characters feel like humans, referring to them as men and women.

JulesBeHere

Awesome chapter :)


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