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Chapter 39 – Bloodline Synchronization

🕑 Added 2024-03-14 16:00:04 +0000 UTC

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HonestMan

Hey man, thank you for the chapter. I'm new here, i found your novel on royal road and was immediately roped in. You writing was definitely on another level compared to the vast majority of novels in the rising star rankings, most of them sound like they were written as a 14 year old pet project in his spare time. That said, and i want you to know that i'm saying this with the best intentions, I'm not looking to argue or offend you, the overall writing "quality" has gone down a bit in the last 3-4 chapters. They feel rushed, unedited, some sentences feel awkward and "clunky", if it makes any sense, like you wanted to convey an idea so badly that you didn't stop to think if the sentence flowed smoothly. Like i said, I'm not here to argue, take your time, maybe instead of a chapter a day, you can try publishing one every two days; take your time to mull over them, re-read them, no need to rush things, you got us hooked by now. As i said, take your time to edit, this is.... sad to watch, considering i know that you can do a lot better. Take care man.


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