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Jaune's Pineapple Jam Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2023-10-09 02:44:00 +0000 UTC

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Robert Walker

Thanks but he's fine This was years ago before COVID happened

Biggs Ringor

I'm sorry to hear that. I hope he's safe.

Robert Walker

So true My brother learned that too when he was deployed

Biggs Ringor

Exactly! Its so easy to forget that these aren't fighting games. It's not. Fighting in real life has consequences whether for you or your opponent.

Robert Walker

Overconfidence makes you think that everything's going your way. For Jaune, He was so eager to fight real people He forgot not everyone has aura and now someone lost a hand.

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the feedback! I wanted to underline the concept that Actions have Consequences in this chapter. It was mainly represented by Yang and the twins in the first part and by Jaune and his opponents in the last one. I wanted this story to be comedic and light-hearted at times but not doing away with the realities of life. Mainly that shit happens and people get injured when you fight.

Aritra Roy

Hurray! Early Chapter! Anyway, damn, what an ending. Jaune is paying the price for being badass early, it seems. Well, at least his other talents are also shining here, as evident by the Malachite twins talking Yang out of using violence. Splendid work there XD


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