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Jaune's Pineapple Jam Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2023-10-18 09:55:35 +0000 UTC

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Aritra Roy

Neo only now finding out that Chainsaw boy can actually talk, and by extension, probably doesn't know sign language, is both hilarious and kinda sad. She's clearly motivated to make some connections with others after stumbling unto Jaune who can understand her, and where better to start but with the White Fang since they have to work together. Even better, it looked like she had a fellow mute lieutenant to befriend and hopefully have her back if Cinder demanded a reason to kill her and Roman. Only to find out, nope, she's still stuck with Roman, and she can't get anywhere with Jaune unless she gives up crime life entirely.

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you liked the chapter.

Aritra Roy

I agree with having Blake accept her feelings early. It might be circumstancial romance to some degree, but when you have the opportunity to skip angst and go straight to drama, why not take it. As you said, sticking to angst will annoy some people.

Aritra Roy

Holy Jesus, an early chapter. A four-day advanced chapter. And Jaune gets his semblance unlocked early, saving Blake and healing his ass from a stab through the chest. Literally no other huntsman-in-training could pull this off with their aura in the red, but Jaune's massive aura pool is still kicking ass XD. And it ends with a dose of knightshade, perfect.

LuckyPickl3

Yus

Biggs Ringor

Thanks. I was thinking if I didn't make a reveal sooner or later I'd have to make a storyline of Blake trying to hide her growing feelings for Jaune while he's dating Pyrrha. While it would be entertaining, I feel like it would be more filler for the next arc which people might hate. To answer your question. It was Yang. Ruby would be too shocked and embarassed,Weiss would be speechless. Pyrrha...well you'll see her reaction soon. Nora and Sun would be supportively cheering and Ren would look on silently, happy for his leader.

Robert Walker

Oh boy, they are going, to have both Pyrrha, and Jaune on their list, and Neo, may have an 'ara ara' moment with Jaune, I don't know, and who just cursed in the end I wonder, maybe Pyrrha, Weiss, or both?

Robert Walker

Good Call, I wonder who sweared in the end.

Biggs Ringor

I had a different ending in mind for this chapter. Originally it was just gonna end in a group hug then the talk with Weiss, but the impulse to make Blake kiss Jaune in public overpowered me. Let me know what you think, should I have saved the Knightshade reveal for later or was this good?


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