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Jaune's Pineapple Jam Chapter 26

🕑 Added 2023-10-31 15:14:16 +0000 UTC

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Josh

Crazy and delusional Weiss who doesn't understand feelings is the best Weiss.

Aritra Roy

Okay, I've given some thought to the weeks long timeskip. While I do understand your point about Blake wanting to investigate and hinder the White Fang's operations, it's worth remembering that the White Fang is suspicious of a traitor amongst their ranks after Blake showed up to the docks. Also, if not for Jaune, the White Fang would have pulled off their biggest dust heist ever. So the best explanation for the canon time skip is that Cinder decided she had enough dust and orders White Fang to begun prepping for their activities at Mountain Glenn, leaving Blake waiting for weeks with nothing to fight against.

Robert Walker

Oh this is going to be good

Biggs Ringor

The fact that you feel like that about Weiss means all is going according to my plan mwahahaha. Stay tuned for whatever shenannigans I have planned for her.

Robert Walker

Jeez Weiss is so delusional, she is still on her high horse, she is going to crash and burn in no time, when she finds out the truth. Even though the truth was already given to her. I really felt like facepalming for what she was thinking, and doing, I wonder if Pyrrha, and Blake, are going to double slap her, lol!!

Biggs Ringor

Side note: I agree with you that current Jaune isn't really ready to assert his self on their three-way relationship, but we will get there once he gets the confidence. I would actually go so far that Jaune was working normally as a waiter in that expensive gala while he accidentally seduces the Rothschild heiress and bumps unintentionally into a Royal princess that falls for the suspension bridge effect on the way.

Biggs Ringor

I'd also like to say that I too am excited to write Cinder's POV this arc. So much potential for humor and plot adjustment.

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the feedback! The main issue I'm having now is the timeline. V1 and V2 had a timeskip of weeks in between the two of them. But thats something I'm having trouble with because I dont think it would take weeks before Blake jumps into the thick of things again. What we're having right now is a bit of a down time before ramping things up again. The next few chapters would be dedicated to getting our knight up to par and team rwby's adjustment with their new dynamics. Think of it like a calm before the shitstorm, one day theyre having foodfights and dates then the next thing you know a stolen paladin mows down the freeway. Still we are gonna get to the villains side of things soon just to show that they too are adjusting.

Aritra Roy

Holy Jesus, you're posting this a day after introducing Thy Rusted Knight to us? Goddamn, I didn't even think there would be yet more character drama to explore amongst Team RWBY, I thought Cinder would have been informed about Jaune and THAT would be that major conflict this volume. Not going to lie, I am far more interested to see how Sun, Penny, and Team Cinder react to the Jaune/Weiss drama. I should point out however, that Cinder's team is going to find out that the Invincible Girl is secretly dating an unassuming Valean named Jaune, and that's going to throw Cinder for a loop. On that note, I need to point that you're not just earning 100$, you managed to get that level of support in the span of two months. And you got all this support with less than 25 chapters of Pineapple Jam posted outside of Patreon. That's a solid testament to your writing quality and update schedule right there. Just watch that $100 leap to several hundred as people start reading Thy Rusted Knight. Additional side note: Pyrrha hinting at another threesome is hot as fuck, though I really hope Blake decides to go with it, becuz Jaune isn't ready to push his luck yet. Even if he is an insanely lucky bastard. If you really think about it, what Jaune has done is equivalent to a regular guy sneaking into an expensive gala and seducing a Rothschild heiress. 🤣🤣🤣

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the feedback! While I won't spoil anything, I will say that Weiss wont do anything too drastic. Her view here is colored by her disbelief in Jaune and SDC heiress background causing her to be paranoid and delusional. Add to that her pride and not wanting to be wrong just makes her stubbornly believe the worst about Jaune. She'll have her growing pains this arc (pun unintended), that's why I'm focusing on her flaws right now to make her growth more significant. I'm actually trying to angle her flaws in a bit of humerous amd crackish way but still in the middle of learning how to convey that. And yes you are correct neptune will be involved Anyway, hopefully it wont be too long before we see her bloom. Its just that i know the pace is kinda slow but the setting and character thoughts just pull me in and doesnt want me to skip over them. Hope you bear with me on this for awhile

Biggs Ringor

You guys inspire me to write more XD

Jamieoeyes

This bullshit with Weiss better not last long cause the urge to reach through the screen and strangle the life out of her is getting stronger with each second, I read her thoughts, and I think Weiss will ruin her relationship with everyone regardless with her accusation hell I'm expecting for Pyrrha to slap her and read the riot act to her, she probably won't believe Jaune is genuine until she's made an outcast by everyone, she needs to learn the hard way apparently that the world doesn't revolve around her. And you know what the funny thing is I can see Jaune of all people being the one to give her a second chance when she tries to make up for everything, of course getting a slap in the face from reality when she gets turned down from Neptune during the dance with Jaune convincing him to talk to her again just like in canon would be sweet as well.

LuckyPickl3

Our guys burning 🔥 his pencil


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