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Jaune's Pineapple Jam 40

🕑 Added 2024-04-02 16:06:54 +0000 UTC

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Robert Walker

I can see your concern, but, for me personally she is essentially I'm college, I seen 15 year Olds who graduated high-school, and in college, he was in my class. But if you want a technicality, when she turns 16 she can go for it.

Jamieoeyes

I agree with addressing Ruby's potential feelings and the idea of joining the Harem later as well as making the foundation for it, but I don't think you will need to wait forever since Ruby should be turning 16 right around the Vytal Festival since it's in the Fall Season and after that once Ruby regains concisions Winter is not far along, even though we don't know how big the time skip is between that. But Ruby should be 16 by then so after that you can start working out more of the relationship status and how far they go besides kissing and hand holding. Anyway, that's my thoughts on it I'm also wondering if you're going to bring Yang in the Harem as well or if you have different plans, especially since both her sister and partner seem to be sharing the same guy, so I'm wondering what you are going to do for Yang there.

Daniel Hyena

Good to know that this story is going for the long run and don't feel you need to reveal plot points to appease the readers, just mention that is gonna get addressed next chapter (even through I'm grateful and happy about the spoiler), unless you want direct feedback in witch case it's perfect.

Biggs Ringor

I guess I can share this spoiler just to calm your worries. Be warned though, it's going to be a big one. SPOILER WARNING - YOU'VE BEEN WARNED. Anyways, Ruby isn't joining just yet. She's just too young and everything is just being pushed to her right now. She'll have a talk with Pyrrha in the next chapter or two. There, she will draw the line. Her foundation for falling for Jaune will go through several arcs up until the Mistral/Raven arc I have planned.

Daniel Hyena

This might be addressed later but I just can't see Ruby as a love interest, putting a 15 year old any kind of sexual situation doesn't compute to me, Coeur Al'Aran try it 2 separate times and both only happen at the epilogue (White sheep and Forged destiny), so I would recommend to build the foundation here, resolve the Blake uncertainty and then come back to Ruby by Volume 4 time line wise when she is older. I'm bizarrely coming around to the possibility of Weiss joining Polycule as one those people that have a domineering attitude but are really a sub behind close doors. I have the suspicion that Sun took Neptune to party with the twins and they ended up in some kind of foursome, I don't even know why.

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the comment! I got the Aura Boosters from Couer's fics actually. In my story, we're gonna see more lore building on Aura High next chapter with the medics but they will see with Jaune's Aura Amp, it is different. Just put in Aura High there as something people will try to use to explain Jaune's state from their perspective. Since it is something I think might exist if someone tries to cheat in the Vytal Tournament. People will eventually notice that his is natural instead of just man-made. We will see how different Aura Amps effects really are once we get back to a Jaune POV. It might look the same, but the drawbacks and mechanics are different. For now, I ask you to be patient.

Jamieoeyes

Hmmm I don't know while I do agree you need something to at least not make Jaune invincible, I don't think this Aura High is the way to go. For instance, these "Aura Boosters" are man-made how they were able to develop something that effects a spirituel concept such as Aura is still beyond me since it's your own creation, but Jaune's Aura Amp shouldn't cause something like that, since it comes from his soul to begin with. So, he shouldn't have any adverse effects except for maybe his Aura draining faster since he keeps using the amp to recharge his Aura faster instead of naturally, and it can be accomplished naturally since we have Hazel as an example of regenerating his Aura faster than normal people most likely thanks to training it that way. but even Ozpin pointed out that in the end you just had to get him to his limit so I would think you would have to physically and mentally exhaust him just to achieve this. Now while I think Jaune regenerating his Aura faster is a good skill he shouldn't be able keep it up after a long while since you can still get tired one way or the other. At best I was expecting Jaune to Amp up the other aspects of his Aura, such as his shield to tank damage or at least medicate it since he most likely still lost a lot of Aura when him and Nora got hit by the Colossus in Vol 6, but that's where the Aura regen comes in but as I said before he shouldn't be able to keep it up forever since he would have to get exhausted at some point. And I think Jaune's only scratching the surface of what he can Amp with his Semblance, like he should be able to amplify the strength part of his Aura making him strong or at least somewhat ahead of Yang and Nora's own strength enhancing Semblances. Amplifying his speed aspect should make him just as fast or even faster than Ruby and Harrits speed Semblances. While also amplifying his reflexes and reaction time to pull off the same thing that Ozpin did in his fight with Cinder in Vol 3 which was moving fast enough to leave afterimages, and then of course there's using an amplified Aura slash that's on par with Adams "Moonslice" Semblance. This is what Jaune should be able to do while amping his own Aura however it should still be draining since he's wasting Aura to perform superhuman feats but not as much as he should thanks to his amp but still draining if continually spammed. Anyway, that's my thoughts on the matter about this Aura High and how it shouldn't affect Jaune but it's your story I can only offer advice if this is the route you want to take to go for it, anyways this was an interesting chapter over all I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next, keep up the good work mate take care and have a good one.

Biggs Ringor

I didn't actually get that far on that fic just yet but I always thought you needed your Aura to use Semblance. So having at 0 should automatically negate that but hey, I think it's cool and Monty's rule for RWBY was the rule of the cool.

Aritra Roy

Oh, I think I know where this is from. A Rusty Huntsman by barsev, where Jaune has returned to the past, but with Aura Amp evolved (or magicked?) to the point where he can outright regenerate his aura from zero, endlessly. His endurance spooked the shit of Adam, although to be fair, Adam couldn't see Jaune's face because of a helmet. Still a funny irony for Adam of all people to despair in the face of an unstoppable glacier slowly walking up to him.

Biggs Ringor

Yeah, I wanted to tweak Aura Amps setting a bit. If I remember correctly, the way it was described in canon gave it a lot of potential for Jaune to become the perfect tank. The immovable object that just keeps amplifying/boosting his Aura indefinitely. It was just so broken that Jaune could literally be OP if they just made him use it the right way. As for what happened here. Keeping your Semblance on from 4am in the morning to well in the afternoon should have some effects on you. Going to showcase the boons and drawbacks when I finish this chapter in a few hours. Just gonna sleep first.

Aritra Roy

Ah shit, Aura Amp has evolved into Limit Break. Pyrrha's gonna be watching his aura meter like a hawk, going forward. Also, finally, Cinder shows up!


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