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Jaune's Pineapple Jam 41

🕑 Added 2024-04-05 14:02:58 +0000 UTC

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Jamieoeyes

Sienna's Traits are her ears the tiger stipes she has are tattoos and as for Tock her traits are her scales, the sharp teeth are actually prostatic that replace her normal once's cause not only did she want an extra weapon to fall back on but to also give herself the intimidation factor to make her enemies/victims terrified of her. And thank you if there's any RWBY expertise that people need, I'm the go to guy I've been an immense help to the author I beta read for, though I probably not as good as other's but I do my best with all the stuff I've learned, anyway talk to ya more later mate take care and have a good one.

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the feedback, I always find your comments insightful. For Faunus Traits, what would Sienna Khan's trait be? Is it the skin pattern or the ears? It always made me confused especially when other Faunus characters like Tock (who have scales and really sharp teeth) are introduced. They made it seem possible that some Faunus can have more than 1 trait. Rare but possible I guess. Aura Boosters kinda like maybe just there like Dust. I can imagine a crazy scientist would try to eat Dust only to find out it will kill you bit somehow someone manages to figure out the right amount and type that can help you. The Gang should absolutely bring that up to the adults but right now they all knew they wouldn't have even been there in the first place if not for Blake's sake. So it flies just right over their heads though they wouldn't jump in into something like that headfirst from now on. (No promises in not being pulled in inadvertently though) The Talk has been a long time coming and I am excited to write it. Thank you for your congratulations and I hope you keep enjoying my stories.

Jamieoeyes

Nice wasn't expecting Tsune to show up, but maybe you should just give her one Faunus Trait as there's canonically no one with two, that's just Coeur's fanon. so, either give her Fox ears or give her a Fox tale like me and the author I beta read for have. All and all not bad and sort of makes sense with impulsiveness with Aura High since you're expressing yourself more then you should and that's not a good thing all the time, also find it interesting with what the Aura Booster are made of, yet another creation of Atlas I presume. Speaking of which the Gang should at least throw it back in the teachers faces that if they did their jobs better then they wouldn't have to get involved and besides they learned valuable information that they can use in the future now thanks to their meddling. Anyways good chapter overall and I'm looking forward to the talk with Jaune and Blake finally it's been a long time coming. Also, congratulations mate on the big news parenthood is a big step in life so I'm wishing the all the best for you and your wife, anyway, take care and have a good one.

LuckyPickl3

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