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Rusted Knight 06

🕑 Added 2024-03-13 14:35:42 +0000 UTC

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Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the feedback! That's what I was actually thinking. Rusted Jaune might not share his plans with the Ozluminati but he is already changing things. Nobody could claim he's not doing anything now.

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the feedback! Rusted Jaune actually has a lot of reasons to push and reveal Jaune this hard and here's what I thought of. Let me know what you think. 1. I think Rusted Jaune has a lingering bitter feeling that it took him too long to ask Pyrrha for help in training him in V1. If I was him, I would always think that if only I had Pyrrha train me even sooner maybe I could have done something. I would have been better, I would have been stronger, etc. (A bit OOC maybe but it's how I'm imagining someone stuck in one place will think with only his memories to accompany him. So he's projecting himself into this Jaune to spare him that pain.) 2. With him exposing it, it can't be used as blackmail material for Young Jaune. Sure, Cardin will push him around a bit but nobody would be able to do anything about Jaune because the teachers have publicly approved of his presence in Beacon. 3. This effectively removes Jaune's machismo/bravado face to his team. With him exposed, there's no reason for him not to accept help from his teammates especially that they've all publicly approved of him as well. Only misplaced pride would make him not accept their help and it would only take one of them smacking him around for him to pull his head out of his ass if ever.

PathKeeper

Good length and a nice ending to the fight. Was unsure about the reveal of Jaune fake transcripts but after thinking it over and rereading it the way you did was a nice clean way of doing it. It will allow you to shift and change the plot in a natural way. Looking forward to how the other students react and change to this revelation. Most interested in how Cardin and his team will change. Overall a great chapter that opens your story to many different and interesting paths.

Mercer Smiit

While I can see why RK is doing his best to teach Younger Jaune, the reveals of his transcripts and his lack of training are bit backhanded. I can understand why he would do so, sparing yourself the pain and all that, HC think that RK knows it's hypocritical for him to do so. Hope they have some leg work on that office meeting.

LuckyPickl3

Right on πŸ‘

Biggs Ringor

Thanks man. Thank you for the support.

LuckyPickl3

Just right πŸ‘

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for liking it. You will have more Rusted Knight chapters approx 2 weeks from now. For now, gotta go back to Pineapple Jam as we are nearing some of my favorite arcs. The dance and the breach.

Channel 100

I need more


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