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Thy Rusted Knight 16

🕑 Added 2024-07-29 13:56:43 +0000 UTC

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RedGlare76

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Jokester Jack

I like how Jaune settled things with the two girls in his life, apologizing to both of them about ignoring one's feelings and then pestering the other one with his feelings, and I'm glad they're not going to rush into anything and take time to figure out what they mean to each other, heck we barely made it through the volume one, I hope Jaune and Weiss relationship improve after this

Jamieoeyes

No worries, mate it's just that this chapter really got under my skin for some reason but I'm glad things are going to be properly addressed in the next chapter or so, I want RK Jaune to be completely blunt with what has happened in canon when talking to the group. How Beacon fell with Pyrrha and Ozpin and countless other people's death during the Vytal Festival, Penny getting torn apart by Pyrrha's Semblance and Yang being framed and then getting her arm cut off by Adam just to hurt Blake more, Blake running back home to menagerie only to have to deal with issues there thanks to Adams coup against Sienna. Weiss being forced back home and disinherited, because she finally woke the fuck up and called out all the asshole Atlas elites including her sperm donor, before running away from Atlas for Mistral. All the shit Team RNJR had to deal with before finally making it to Mistral, Yang finally meeting her mother who is the leader of a bandit tribe that has hurt a lot of innocent people and that she kidnapped Weiss, the battle of Haven and how Weiss nearly died if it hadn't been for Jaune finally unlocking his Semblance to save her, and the fact that the headmaster Lionheart is a cowardly traitor. Traveling to Argus where they learned the truth about Salem and Ozma. The death of Adam by Blake and Yangs hands, and then all the shit that happened in Volume 7 and 8, as well as Jaune's twenty years of isolation and the truth about the story of "The Girl who fell Through the World". Telling them all this will make them all truly understand the gravity of the situation and how well and truly fucked they all are in the original timeline, once they all understand that I will be well and truly satisfied, since now they will approach this with the seriousness and determination and caution that is required for what's to come as Huntsmen and Huntress. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter mate take care and I really do hope you think about doing that non-canon omake with Tsune since I want to see the Vixen fucked silly, anyways catch ya later.

Biggs Ringor

It's fine. I'm not actually 100% satisfied with this chapter either. The draft was actually a lot longer and darker detailing a lot of things but rewatching RWBY gave me an idea. There's a very different mindset in V1-V3 in the cast. Despite vattling terrorists, criminals, and grimm invasion during the breach, the cast had a very bright view on the world despite the stress. They had that certain innocence around them and its because of one particular person highlighting it, Yang. Yang was the one to pull Blake away and get her to the Dance. Yang was the one who kept her jokes up and added the levity which her team jumped on despite what they were going through. Things only really started getting darker once Pyrrha had her Maiden issues with Ozpin and Yang getting framed by Emerald and Mercury in the tournament in V3. Right now they are in V2 mindset because of RK Jaune beating their asses and dropping the truth on them. But while things aren't simple, they haven't really lost anyone or anything yet. They still have that certain innocence to them despite things. All they knew were threats were coming and they were connected to the breadcrumbs Ozpin dropped. But even then. The Rusted Knight was already there to help them. Impact really happens when they learn what happen/could happen to each of them. They'll take things seriously once RK Jaune really talks to them about it. Ghost Pyrrha was really set with the flaw of being possesive because its what I think would happen to someone like her. She died and came back to and she would be damned if she lost her man to some hussy, at least that's what I think her mindset was going to be. She has her purpose in this story beyond that however. This chapter wasn't really to be a feel good one. It was meant as a way to point out their flaws that needs to tackled in the next arc: 1. The kids being tinged with innocence while Jaune is the only one who personally knows the stakes. 2. Ghost Pyrrha being set up as she is as Jaune's anchor/connection to his past. 3. Glynda, situated on the other side as flesh and blood, the first one to give RK Jaune physical plrasure in the real world, and set up as a possibility for the future. You could probably see the confict brewing now and a potential struggle happening in the future because of it. This was going to be apparent in the next chapters but I felt like I had to explain it now because I just realized I didn't leave many clues in this chapter for people to realize things. It will be something I have to plan out for in the future. As for non canon omake with Tsune? Yeah sure I'll think about it on my free time.

Jamieoeyes

I don't know mate if I'm going to be completely honest with you, I wasn't happy with this chapter. Weiss feeling like her teeth were being pulled out just for a simple apology, and Yang's continued brazenness. I was hoping for more of an impacted with what RK Jaune did in there sparring match that which was being the brutal beat down they got and the reason for it. I was expecting for them to have a more serious conversation after everything, but it felt like everything was being treated as a joke still, I even expected Blake the more serious one of them all given her past history to be on top of this. Even when Young Jaune tried to steer the conversation on a serious topic Nora ruins it with her stupide mouth which quite frankly made me unimpressed with her. And then we had the thing with Ghost Pyrrha which kind of pissed me off, RK Jaune had 22 years to get over her and finally move on but with her appearance and what they did in the dream, she suddenly feels that no one can have him. Well fucking newsflash for you Pyrrha your dead and buried and all you are doing is haunting Jaune, your technically not alive enough to have full clamed of him, and even though she can probably possess someone, and will most likely get her body back by the end of this story. They need to work under the assumption right now that will never happen, so all Ghost Pyrrha is doing is depriving RK Jaune of having a family or a life of his own when all the stuff with Salem is finally over with, and all the stuff she said to Glynda really was not okay if Pyrrha wasn't a Ghost right now I would have slapped her in the face for that. *Sigh* sorry for that rant mate but either I'm in a mood or this chapter was really not vibing with me, I'm hoping for things to get better cause this left me a bit unhappy which is rare for me when I'm leaving comments on stories. Anyway the one good thing I can take from this is the Glynda bit for however short it was, but it left a bittersweet taste in my mouth because of why it happen in the first place, and that's all I'm going say on the matter so to bring a bit a lightness to this review what Glynda said about what Tsune would have done if she was the one cleaning up after Jaune makes me want to see an non-canon omake of that happening or something like that, because we rarely get to see smut with side characters or any interaction of the sort at all so it would be a nice change of pace. Anyways take care mate and hope you have a good one sorry for the downer comment but just had to let my feelings be know so that maybe the next chapter can be better, anyway all the same thanks for the chapter.

Redwing641

Will we get a Glynda with 2 souls action in the future? It’s either Pyrrha’s physical body comes back from the dead or a psudo-harem 1 body 2 souls freaky Friday swap kinda deal. Kinda throwing ideas around here. Just ignore if it clashes with your vision for the story. TFTC.

Fuji Tatsumaki

Noice one Glynda! You go girl, stake your claim πŸ˜†


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