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Jaune's Pineapple Jam 66

🕑 Added 2024-09-12 14:21:07 +0000 UTC

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haipa

> the end part So much jelly~

Daniel Hyena

That a very harsh situation you found yourself in and all I can really convey is that you did the right thing is scary, you would't believe how many people would do nothing for the fear of rocking the boat or just not wanting to be involved in that situation. Now regarding the story this is one of the reason I was afraid that when Neo comes to the story she would just be welcome with open arms specially Jaune since Neo just force herself on Jaune, I mean she can join if that the direction you wanna take but she would have to really make amends to Jaune and Phyrra. Also the Ruby situation considering she is 15, don't get me wrong I'm not saying that people should wait until marriage to experiment, but just wait until Ruby is older like after the fall of beacon (if it even happens in the story) time wise.

Biggs Ringor

Good idea. I'll edit the notes out of this and just leave it there.

LuckyPickl3

I think it'll be better if things like that are shared in discord

Redwing641

I'm not against you sharing just sympathetic to your plight. Though other may not take kindly to too much info. Take the break. You deserve it.

Biggs Ringor

Yeah, sorry, I understand that now. I think I was still running on fumes and heightened emotions when I posted this that I just couldn't help but rant. Don't worry though, if something happens in the future again I'll just say life happened and not share details. Anyways, I'll be back in form next week i think, i hope at least.

Biggs Ringor

Yeah, sorry, I understand that now. I think I was still running on fumes and heightened emotions when I posted this that I just couldn't help but rant. Don't worry though, if something happens in the future again I'll just say life happened and not share details. Anyways, I'll be back in form next week i think, i hope at least.

Jamieoeyes

Mate I can understand you wanted to share with us the reason why the chapter took so long, but maybe next time don't share everything especially if it's something serious and heavy like that. Since it's going to make it awkward or uncomfortable for people to review or talk about the chapter when they read something like that in the author's note, just something to note for next time, still that's heavy shit dude and I hope the cunt suffers for a long time where he belongs. Anyway, moving on to the chapter, oh boy Cinder is having an easy time inserting herself into Jaune's group, but I have a feeling with how forth coming she was about her past that it might bite her in the ass when the battle of Beacon happens. Since when she eventually fights Jaune, because there's no way in hell he would join her, Jaune is going to throw it in Cinders face that she's no better than the Madam. And that even if she doses succeed it will be too late for her to realize how cold and alone, she will truly be in the end. Because power is never worth it when your alone with no one to truly care about you in the end when your gone, because while you might get power to rule over people that won't stop time from claiming you in the end, and what's left of you will be buried by the people who hated you so that your nothing but a forgotten memory. Of course, since we the readers know about Salems end goal we know that won't happen so it will be interesting to see if Cinder, somehow makes it out alive at the battle of Beacon, and later finds out or Ozpin for some reason blabs what Salem will really do once she gets all the relics. We know both Hazel and Emerald both turned coat when they realized that Oz was telling the truth. So, it will be interesting if Cinder will as well, might have an easier time of it if Jaune somehow pulls out the full rizz and whittles her down enough to truly think about her allegiance, since when you think about Cinder is right back where she was with the Madam, it's just that both the collar and the person holding the leash has changed. Anyway, with JNPR and Cinders team handling the Orphanage Team RWBY is continuing on with Mt Glenn with Blake and Weiss taking out their anger and frustrations on the Grimm since they can't do anything about Cinder while there away. I have a feeling that after the breach the Harem are going to do everything to keep Cinder away from Jaune, orphan past be dammed. Though will have to wait and see if Jaune can truly turn Cinder in the end or if she's too far gone and needs to be put in the ground once and for all and save Amber, anyway this was a good chapter as always mate keep up the good work and I'll talk to you more later take care and have a good one.

Redwing641

f*cking hell man thats heavy. have someone look after that victim 24/7 I also think you should take a break I wont complain if you do cause sh*t like that is needs time to be processed for all those involved. TFTC


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