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Jaune's Pineapple Jam 78

🕑 Added 2024-12-15 14:18:42 +0000 UTC

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Biggs Ringor

Thanks! I plan to take short break first before getting into Thy Rusted Knight, after that, I'll be back on JPJ Part 2 maybe at the end of January or start of February. I already have outlines for the first chapters though so you know I will get back on it when I can.

Biggs Ringor

Winter will have her humbling and own realizations. Lisa, in the grand scheme of things is too small compared to the problems Jaune and the rest will have so she gets away scot free unless of course she bites off more than she could chew. Raven....well, I have big plans for Raven as she will play a crucial role in Part 2. Amber.....you'll have to find out next chapter. :)

Biggs Ringor

Thanks! I'll get right into it.

ch8246

Love the small moments with the girls. I don't know if the plan is to have the girls get with each other or just manly jaune but either way it been fantastic! I do have a question tho, when you finish with part 1 will you be taking a break with JPJ or will you start going into part 2?

Eggroll 08

You miss-spelled "Winter" as "Wunter" in the scene where James informed Glynda he sent Winter to see Weiss. All and all, great chapter. There's a lot to unpack. Also, I can't wait for the Arc family to see the Lover Boy.

Jamieoeyes

I'm with Kaiser here, Winter dose need to suffer some reprimanding, and I think Weiss's relationship with her sister should be strain cause the way Winter was going off made her sound no better than Jacques and being a control freak. Hell, the fact that she said she was going to forcefully take Weiss back to Atlas to their father which they both hate and tried to get away from and have their own freedom doesn't put Winter in a very favorable light now. In fact, Weiss should point everything I just said out to Winter saying she's acting no better than Jacques which would be a massive slap in the face to her with everything she just spouted. Anyway, I really hope that bitch Lisa also gets her own comeuppance, God I fucking hate reporters like her, fucking vultures. Also, it's good to see that Weiss and Blake have some hope again that Ruby and Yang are alive thanks to Glynda telling them that the women who intervened is Yang's mum, which means the sisters are safe and sound. Speaking of which looks like Ruby's finally awake, good now she can smack Qrow for worrying her and Yang and get to finally meet and speak with Raven. Hopefully Ruby tells Raven that taking Yang to Jaune should help thanks to his Semblance, which would both intrigue Raven due to its application, but also give her a sigh of relief that there's a way to further take Yang out of danger. So, all that would need to be done is use a portal to Tai and have him quickly take the girls to Beacon as fast as possible so that Jaune can heal up Yang, as well as have the rest of Team RWBY reunited. Anyway, this was not a bad chapter mate, sorry I haven't comment much in the past chapters, I didn't exactly had much to say at the time but with us approaching the last Arc for this story I'm eager to see what happens next. Will Amber be lost forever and now tied to Pyrrha? Or will Amber be saved somehow; I'm looking forward to what happens as well as how Beacon is going to try and fix the fall out with what happened with the Faunus. Anyway, take care mate and have a good one.

Kaiser Umbra

Fair enough I can’t wait to see what happens next

Biggs Ringor

If I was writing a realistic fic then yes most likely but even then it would not be to the extent you wished for numerous reasons. 1. She has a high position and is a well-connected person. 2. Jaune attracted fans and haters alike for being in a relationship with Pyrrha, Blake, and Weiss, so while many would be angry at her, some will support her. 3. It can be argued as a heat of the moment case. An overprotective sibling reacting harshly to a perceived slight to their loved one instead of a female on male abuse. Considerations will be taken. At most, she would get a reprimand and maybe an unofficial restraining order. For this fic though, plans for Winter for Part 2 are big.

Kaiser Umbra

Is Winter going to get into any trouble for attempted murder because she is in the military and what she did is messed up, and with her position would make Atlas as a whole look bad especially since she attempted to murder the “Hero of Vale” when Atlas has been tasked with protecting Vale. I get that you are doing it for comedy purposes, but as I said in an earlier review on fanfiction Female on Male abuse is not that comedic.


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