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Jaune's Pineapple Jam 80

🕑 Added 2024-12-29 15:30:09 +0000 UTC

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Robert Walker

They are all idiots, and Ruby, don't lose yourself

Biggs Ringor

Thanks for the list! I'm glad you feel that way for Amber. It shows that I was able to write how shitty her situation really is. All I will say for now is there is a reason we are getting one more chapter and an epilogue of sorts. I promise though, Amber will be relevant in Part 2. It was always the plan to include her in the story in some way.

ch8246

Oh god I just read the rest of the chapter! Plase god let amber go to glynda or pyrrha but not ozpin. I really hope something good happens soon cuz goddamn you write the inner circle ( or at least ozpin and ironwood) like absolute dicks. Can't wait to see what happens with ruby and raven. Seems like she's gonna get her shit rock. Someone else in the comments said rubys gonna need to figure out to fight actual people. Myabe get an axe form like summer or sword like qrow? Great job making me feel for these characters. Can't wait to see what you have in store.

Jamieoeyes

Here's all the grammar mistakes I could find so far, they will be marked with this > <. Yang never acted immature, especially in >fdont< of Ruby. She always tried her best to "I know what you want, Rose, and no. >Youbare< too weak for it." Glynda answered, looking >askance< at the other woman beside her. The Schnee's >fave< hardened at that but she couldn't help but look curious at versatile Semblance that she could replicate the >imahe< of magic when combined She might be able to >love< with Glynda for awhile but Ozpin? And yeah, Mistakes that are going to erode Amber's existents! I'm sorry but I really hope this fucking blows up in Ozpin's face, hell I hope Cinder gets the Maiden powers after all just to spite him. With each scene I see with Amber I get angerer and angerer at seeing her so hopeless that I'm close to throwing my laptop against the wall in anger, I'm starting not handle it anymore seeing Amber this broken and I really just want to reach into the screen and wring Ozpin's neck. *sigh* I'm sorry but just like Amber I'm not sure I can take this anymore, with Glynda there was at least a bit of hope, a light in the tunnel now that's all snuffed out, sorry you're a brilliant writer and it's because of that, that I don't think I can read the next lot of chapters without getting emotional. I might need to take a step back for a while cause I don't know how much I can take from here; I really do hope Ozpin fails for once, anyway take care mate and hope you had a happy New Year.

Biggs Ringor

I agree with you about Amber but don't blame me for Ozpin's mistakes. Mistakes will have consequences though. Please send me a list of the grammar mistakes so I can correct them. I've reread and edited it before but a lot must have slipped pass me. P.S. I've only been using my phone to write for the past month so typos do occur because I have fat fingers.

Jamieoeyes

No! No! No! Sorry but I do not agree with this, I'm with Amber on this one. It's one thing if Glynda got the powers, but it's different if it's Ozpin, I know the powers originally belonged to him, but it hasn't been his for so long now that the powers are their own thing. I do not agree with Ozpin who while has done this song and dance millions of times, I draw the line at him basically consuming Amber just to get more magic back and to me it sounds like he's no better than Cinder, cause Amber will now share in Ozpin's curse and never know rest and probably be consumed amongst all the other souls Ozma has fused with over the centuries and I don't even know if a females soul will be compatible with him to begin with. Besides unlike in canon where she was completely unconscious the entire time and didn't know what was going on. Amber in this story is fully aware of what's happening can see what's going on, so what's to stop her from tearing at Ozpin's soul in retaliation just to survive and not be consumed and be part of Ozma's many lives. Yeah nah, I very much prefer Glynda, do you have any idea how broken she will be if she combined both the Maiden powers with her Semblance, which is pretty strong on its own. Not only that Amber is more comfortable being paired with Glynda, and who knows maybe with her she has a chance to switch driver seats with her. Anyway, in laymen terms Ozpin is a pretty terrible idea that I do not agree with, and Glynda should be the one to get the powers, cause at least there's an end with her so that Amber can have peace. Anyway, with that rant done with, looks like Ruby will have to fight Raven to get her weapon back, though I do agree with Raven that Cresent Rose is woefully underequipped for fighting human enemies. I know Ruby signed up to fight the Grimm as the Huntsmen and Huntress she admired so much do, but she needs to learn the cold hard reality that her enemies aren't always going to be Grimm. Much like the White Fang and Torchwick and Neo, and Salems lieutenants. She will need to eventually kill in order to protect the innocent, or because the enemies are too dangerous to leave alive, like a certain Scorpion zealot. So Ruby needs to accept that fact and upgrade Crecent Rose into having a form that's meant to fight humans. Qrow is such of an example with having Harbingers Great sword mode mainly for humans and its scythe mode for Grimm. And if Ruby's going to be stubborn about it then, Raven should point out that all Huntsmen and Huntress have at least killed someone during their career, like all her teachers at Beacon, and even her father, Qrow and even Summer as well. Anyway, win or lose, Ruby and Yang will refuse to stay with them since they have friends and teammates waiting for them back at Beacon. I can see Yang being the more vocal and spiteful to Raven and refusing to be stuck with her when she could be helping her friends at Beacon, and Qrow sure as hell won't stand for it either and would be willing to fight her if he has to so that him and the girls can go home, and I'm not sure if telling Raven that Jaune can speed Yangs recovery will work but it's at least worth a shot. Anyway, I really hope the Ozpin thing doesn't happen, so I eagerly await the next chapter and see what happens. P.S: You have also made a lot of grammar mistakes that you need to fix as well.

Biggs Ringor

Jamieoeyes is correct in his explanation. They can't separate the power from the soul but they can take the soul and push it into another. The soul transfer itself is not restricted by age and gender considering they are already going to forcefully use science to do it, they only needed another candidate to do it. In this case......it is Ozpin. :)

Biggs Ringor

Amber's plight is important going forward into Part 2. How it changes and resolves itself, you'll have to find out but you'll see where I am going with it in the next update. The Ozluminati are just so used to calling the shots and being restricted by Maidens' magical rules have them locked in their way of thinking. They needed a fresh take on things and in this case, it starts with Jaune's suggestion. How they take it forward will be one of the plot points in Part 2. And no, it is not bad to want to call them out of their bs. They got used to thinking that they needed young girls and resigned themselves to that method and never even thought to look for another option all because of the greater good.

Chronicle Clock

I like to think that mama arc will know jaune though process of going to Argus and when jaune opens the door of saphron house he sees the whole family with mama arc smiling

ch8246

Well I'm feeling kinda odd right now...on one end I would've like the idea of amber being like a ghost that pyrrha could see and talk to but if that means merging them and making a new person, then that's a no go. On the other I'm really hoping that amber finds a way to tell them to stop cuz seeing her desperation and pleading hurts a lot. With how everything that's happened I'm really hoping someone just gives oz a swift kick in the nuts. I understand that some choices mean sacrificing people but it just seems like he and the rest of the inner circle just keeps making the wrong choices again and again. Is it bad I want jaune and co to call them out more on there bs? With half of the crew knowing the deeper details it should be easier to not have to tip toe around this stuff anymore.

Jamieoeyes

No from what I gathered I think what Jaune was getting at was that since Ozpin's inner circle isn't using the conventual way to transfer the Maiden powers like how it's normally done, and how Cinder managed to steal it. And that the powers themselves are bound to Amber's soul, which they planned on ripping out of her body and stuffing it into Pyrrha, so she can get the Fall Maiden powers. So, in simpler terms that Jaune said that made Ozpin and Ironwood pause, if they plan on transferring the Maiden powers along with Amber's soul, then they don't really need to follow the rule of using a young woman as the new host, which means that someone like Glynda can become the new Maiden even though she's above the required age already, it's just that now she may be sharing her body with Amber, since Ambers soul will be dragged along with the other half of the Maiden powers when they do the transfer, I think that's what's going to happen anyways.

micheal Anderson

So I’m little confused, the maiden powers are connected to the soul, so ozpin was gonna merge ambers with Pyrrha. But jaune says ( forgive me if getting this wrong ) no, why not try separate the power from the soul? So will that mean amber will still life but no longer have the maiden powers, or atleast half for now. Am I getting that right?

micheal Anderson

Wait this chapter isn’t done!? God damn this already feels like the full package. Not that I’m complaining. Keep up the good work lad. I’m absolutely enjoy it

Robert Walker

Too true.

Biggs Ringor

Chapter isn't done yet so you'll have to wait for things to pan out.

Robert Walker

Him and Pyrrha might still be on Ozpin's side, and Yang and Ruby learning about Salem may change somethings. Unless Ruby or Qrow mentions that Jaune could heal

Biggs Ringor

Why would it?

Robert Walker

I still hope that this doesn't ruin their relationship, Yang and Ruby with Jaune I mean


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