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Early Procedure Chapter 09 (full part)

🕑 Added 2024-03-30 02:06:46 +0000 UTC

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Greenjuices

Ah... I get it... So you want is the moment when they got conditioning. I think I could try it litlle bit on next chapter whenever we got Hikaru plot. Honestly my main focus is not on mind control aspect, but feminization and bimbofication aspect, so that's might be one that lacking in my story.

ben4321

Well, so far it doesn't look so bad, the story is there, there is a goal, lots of possibilities for different kinks, BUT I also see a lot of wasted potential: iconic procedure, early procedure, and Butterfly, have a very clear focus on mind control, hypnosis, and a bit Condtioning, that's not bad in itself, the problem is that with these three kinks, the PATH is EVEN MORE IMPORTANT than the end result! In early procedure, for example, you see Craig on Akira briefly sitting in a chair, *click* and in the next picture it's all over! that's not hot or arousing, the subliminal messages, the hypno videos, the conditioning are THE MOST IMPORTANT thing here! And that's exactly where the problem is, each of the protagonists constantly complains about what was done to him/her, although we don't even know exactly what was done to them! I mean, what's so bad about "sitting in a chair"? I hope it didn't come off as offensive, if it did then I'm sorry, that wasn't my intention, I just wanted to give you my constructive criticism! :P