HarveyRothman
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Starfox cartoon animatic, 1st complete cut
🕑 Added 2018-08-14 13:16:00 +0000 UTC It's nice to see all the separate sequences finally joined together, but now here comes the hard part: getting rid of the naff bits, and making the good bits great. I reckon at least a third of this is going to need significant changes, or better yet, improved character development.Any critiques, or even saying what bits are boring or poorly executed, is helpful!
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Anders O.H Moberg
don't have my thinkin' head on at the moment but quite enjoyed this at this stage, hadn't been followin' this toon from earlier stages.. cheers for sharing!! maybe i'll return later in the week with some thoughts
