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Conjoining of Paragons Chapter 35

🕑 Added 2022-05-16 17:35:48 +0000 UTC

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Agent Frank

That last scene is one of the best moments in the story so far.

avatar roko

When you are going to update cop again????

Mauison

I also think it might be a tad early, this would work a lot better as a big reveal a little later on after they’ve achieved something together or gone through another ordeal.

Victory For The People

I think your predicted potential argument for the fact she's never had a meaningful relationship before is what is the true cause here.

Dio

for me timing is quite alright,35 chapters and whole year spent in book is quite enough for story develop further. its not rushed and it didnt took 100 chapters either imo

pra86

I'm a bit unsure if it's a little too early in the story, for a moment like this. For any version of Riddle to realize that somebody else will always be more important to them, than their own immortality, is probably the most significant character development there can be. A mere crush or fondness for him wouldn't have been enough to deter her, so her feelings should run far deeper. Considering she's only known Harry for a year, and regularly interacted with him for just the latter half of the year, it does seem a bit too fast. Though I suppose you could argue that she has had no truly genuine relationships other than him.... Well, I'll be looking forward to seeing if or when she finally acts on it.