Mia Gabriella
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WIP COMIC Chapter 1 Act 1
🕑 Added 2023-09-02 17:53:01 +0000 UTCThe first sort of act to my first comic chapter. BUT it’s very sketchy!!!! And kind of hard to decipher. So if you want to wait a few days for a more finished product I implore you to wait! However the next time I release this it should maybe have a couple page bridges and much nicer art, similar to the first couple pages. Most of these are sketched today and yesterday, I would be faster paced, but as I’m on a family trip I’m juggling a lot! Believe me…trying to communicate with Italian relatives is a lot more tiring than my comic. The comic has been so fun to plan out. I’ll happily accept criticism on my pages, however I hope you’ll also appreciate that since things are unfinished atm it’s not too polished. As long as you feel the pacing seems ok I’m happy. Let me know if these pages require some scene setting, IE outside shot of hexias den. The story will unfold as more goes on and I don’t want to hand out all the facts yet.
Also yes… u will get some nsfw heart taker and hexia >;)
Also I’m not sure where wolf will come into this story YET. Sorry for anyone who has missed him!!!!
Comments
freakdiablo
Yes! I can see this as a comic.
DerI3auer
Thats great, I'm looking forward to more of it 👻
Todd Metcalf
As always, your work is amazing! That being said… https://i.imgur.com/uB4H1px.mp4 😉😹
DSPatch
Love it!
