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Then Be Batman: Chapter 6
🕑 Added 2023-09-10 04:23:38 +0000 UTCBreaking the schedule for a moment. Chapter four, when I posted it on the forums, got some extremely well justified criticism. The issues with flow and presentation absolutely mean I need to go back and do some serious editing.
Chapter four will be edited, and probably combined with chapter five. As a result, this which is currently labeled chapter six, will probably end up being chapter five. And this does need some editing. However, in this case, while there is some rambling in the later half of the chapter, this is a deliberate choice. He's finally getting to brood on a rooftop. Overall, sorry for the chapter being kinda a downer. While I don't intend for this fic to be any sort of pity party or drama thing, it's not batman without some brooding and conflicted emotions.
Anyway, I really appreciate all of your support and I wanted to make sure that everyone here has access to stuff ahead of time, so I broke the schedule to get this chapter out. Now I'll edit the others and repost on the forums, so keep an eye out on in your chosen location. If requested, I can send you the edited version of four and five.
After I get four and five fixed and posted, I will be returning to Ice Pie, and doing two, possibly even three chapters before I return to Then Be Batman. Votes for what I should focus on were mostly even but did lean towards Ice Pie, and a fifty dollar tier patron requested an extra chapter. So I'm specifically going for a minimum of three and probably four Ice Pie chapters this month, but probably only one more Then Be Batman unless my health holds up better than usual.
Comments
Einar Strandberg
Oh what a great chapter. The little what ifs and maybes are the worst, and I love the way you write them.
Benjamin Hower
A good thinky chapter. Thanks for writing!
