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Ice Pie: Chapter 18
🕑 Added 2023-09-19 06:54:00 +0000 UTCWell, I didn't end up cutting this down the way I thought it was going to go. In fact, it ended up long. As in, more that twice as long as chapter 17. And here it is, basically a day and a half later.
I'll post the last chapter on the forums tomorrow or something. Still want to do some editing. Comments appreciated!
Comments
Benjamin Hower
Lots of good "bon mots" this chapter, as that teacher would say. I enjoyed the round peg in the round hole... that stabs you! "But the beauty is in the making.” hits pretty strongly too. Thanks for writing!
Green0Photon
Woo, an update! Didn't expect it so quickly