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New excerpt from the book draft: I am always looking for this soup
🕑 Added 2025-03-27 22:59:48 +0000 UTCHere's a draft for a chapter I wrote last week, for patreons' eyes only.
I don't know if I should keep the dialogue at the beginning or not, what do you think? Does it work, is it interesting/distracting?
I am finally learning the lesson to attach it as a pdf to preserve my freakishly careful formatting that patreon always flattens lol
I'm over here just working on this book in my little corner of the world; would love to hear your thoughts if you read it <3
Thanks for your support!!
love, namee
Comments
Christy NaMee Eriksen
Thank you for reading and offering feedback!
Ashley Lally
Yes to the dialogue as well; it sets the tone for the entire chapter. A beautiful scene that I could see, hear... felt like I was witness to observing it all.
Christy NaMee Eriksen
Thanks for reading and for chiming in about the dialogue!
MK MacNaughton
I love this so much. You describe the exquisite discomfort and hope and want so vividly well 💜 Yes to the dialogue! Helps me to see it. I love SunWoo chiming in. I love the restaurant sounds talking, and I love the powerful, beautiful final sentences 💕
