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🕑 Added 2023-07-12 21:07:56 +0000 UTC

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CNN

Overall a great update, but I do have a few questions. One is the overall continuity/timeline while the game happens. One is the boss storyline, the wife cheats with him at the second company party but then they go back to saying that she is just blowing him- seems inconsistent. The other is what is going on with the Jenna party, and if the wife (likely) cheated with BBC at the party. That seems disconnected from the sharing story line because that is supposedly the first time she slept with BBC. Unsure if it'll be explained later but just seems to have some disconnects. Still loved the update though, looking forward to more.

LordCaesar

Hey i really must say that your writing is the secret gem here. I played the new Update and noticed that you changed the pacing a lot. It seems pretty "realistic" and the chars are believable. I think porn games are at their best when they try to mirror our Real Life. Its the "what would Happen if my wife did this?" , "How would Things Play Out ?", that does it for most people. Many Patrons want to JUMP directly into the BBC Whore Plot. But that would be a completly Strange act Out of Character for the wife. She loves the mc and the mc is also "good" in bed. The writing of the sloew corruption and Idea brainwahsing from Cristina and Jenna was perfect. In the end she wants to fuck jax but she doesnt says IT. She stills wants to believe that she only Cheats because the mc cheated. In the Sex act she Says, that IT IS the best Sex of her Life and after IT, she IS really sorry and ashamed. Not because she cheated, because she realises that the Girls were right. The BBC was Miles Better than the mc. But she still loves him and thats why she wants the mc to Tell her that she stops before she cant get Back anymore. Thanks for the Update. Good writing !


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