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The Weekend v2 0.1.8 alpha 1

🕑 Added 2021-09-30 15:57:00 +0000 UTC

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tufty

Let's chat about these things in DMs, it's a lot easier to follow.

Nunya Biznez

So would Casey refusing to shave anything other than "her" face. And this could be handled by some simple if/else statements after the choice was made. For instance, deciding not to shave could change The Evil One's comment later on from "your legs look nice" to "your legs look like crap" without otherwise changing the passage. The same could be done with a refusal to wear a dress or ANY OTHER femininity- refuting choice. Honestly, I love the story but the lack of choices when it comes to BASIC things like how Casey is going to treat his/her body, things that could easily, with the tools you already have in place, confirm or deny acceptance of the change (s)he has undergone just anger me. You don't have to change the whole story with ANY of these possible choices, and the fact that you don't offer them DESPITE not having to change the story for them is extremely disappointing.

Nunya Biznez

Also, a rejection of the whole makeup process, a reaction of, "Who cares? This is going to end tomorrow, RIGHT?" or something similar would be a nice rejection of femininity AND a nice "bite me" to The Evil One's attempts at "friendship."


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