Kit Falbo
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General Update
🕑 Added 2021-04-16 21:00:01 +0000 UTCRise of Chess is in the hands of beta readers. Because there may be some revisions needed I'm hesitant to dig into the untitled book 3. After some soul searching I've decided I want to do something with the Talos June book, aka Intelligence Block. No. not a sequel or a novella.
The title is bad. The cover is pretty, but not quite what I want. The first chapter, while it inspired the idea is peoples biggest complaint and doesn't mesh will with the rest of the book.
What I'm looking to do is re-write the first chapter to bring the foreshadowing more in line and to introduce a closer perspective of Talos June when he's not bogged down under Wizard Joontal.
I also want to re-title the book.
Then I'm planning on pulling it off of Kindle Unlimited and testing it out with a new blurb and wide release. (It can't make any less money at the moment)
As for what you can do? I wouldn't mind help with title ideas. I'm leaning towards one that is blunt about what this book is, but I appreciate opinions. Here are the things I've been running through this morning.
The risks of being a corporate wizard
The risks of being a techno-wizard
Unacceptable risk of techno-wizardry
The errors of techno-wizardry
The fatal errors of techno-wizardy
Artificial consequences of techno-wizardy
Artificial risks
Artificial errors
Artificial Wizardry
Artificial Wizardry and risks
Risks and Artificial Wizardry
Path of technowizardy
Path of a Techno-wizard
The Character of a Techo-wizard
The character of an artificial wizard
Unacceptable risks of artificial wizardry
The risks of being an artificial wizard
Anyways... Input welcome. Thanks for being my patrons.
