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Little Sister Briana: Chapter 33

🕑 Added 2022-07-07 15:02:21 +0000 UTC
Little Sister Briana: Chapter 33

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I appreciate it!

Good point. Your stories are defiantly not boring and very engaging. No rush just thought I’d throw some sunshine your way.

I'm sure I'll write more stories with those characters. I already have a few ideas. But I need some time after the book ends to develop those ideas and make something really good. The last thing I want to do is churn out Briana stories that become samey and boring. I want to make sure that the stories stay engaging and fun. :)

If you had any question as to how popular LSB is all you have to do is look at some of the comments from previous chapters. I defiantly would read a 3rd series from her and her friends/family. It’s the best story you have on here. I enjoy all the ones from the universe you’ve created but Briana series is my favorite. I hope you come back to it.

Thanks it came to me as I was writing it.

I think she needs a long hard spanking. But that’s assault unless she has no choice. “Either take your punishment and leave Mel alone or we tell the police what you did” sort of thing. I don’t think she did anything illegal enough to get in too much trouble with the law.

Glad you liked it! We're finally getting to a place where Beatrix is going to have to reap what she's sown....

That's a great insight. I hadn't thought of it exactly that way, but it's true. Beatrix only does things that benefit her. Saving Melody was absolutely for her own ego/possessive nature.

Yes Beatrix is a straight up bi*ch. Just a horrible person. It would be so nice for her to get an nice long spanking. Mel is safe for now but a final fallout with Beatrix is coming I’m sure. This time they have Rosa and their family behind them.

Paul Bennett

Another great chapter. Also wonderful insights from the comments. I spoke on a previous chapter about my feelings towards Beatrix, and those feelings have not changed, ( yes, I realize she is a fictional character.) However she is a toxic bi*ch! I am very happy for Melody. I hope they find peace, contentment, and a SSC relationship with Rosa, Mom, Dad, and Brianna. Thank you for sharing this chapter!

Yes they do. Mel is confused over what love is. Beatrix was never the savior they Mel makes her out to be. I think Mel realizes that and breaks it off. It sounds to me like Beatriz didn’t rescue Mel from David. She just STOLE Mel from David. Mel just went from one abusive relationship to another. Dom/Sub relationships require a great deal of trust and boundaries. Mel finally discovered it is the Sub that holds the control. “I will let you do this to me but not that.” Being someone’s slave or pet is all fine and good if both parties agree. Same thing goes for Briana in my opinion. She could have left at any time until she realized being a Little was what she wanted. She can still leave but she isn’t going to because she has a family she always wanted.

Obsidrius

Very true

Mom usually knows best.

Obsidrius

Realized I goofed a bit with the pronouns there. But I am hopeful they will learn to listen to Veronica. Also hopefully Veronica can help with the Beatrix situation even if it's just doing damage control.

For sure! Poor kiddo needs a break from all the scary stuff going on.

Great chapter. It was great to see Mel stand up to Beatrix. She was wrong for them. Glad to see they are back with Rosa or getting back. Now all they need is to get back to their family. Mel isn’t out of woods they but they are getting there. Things are looking up. Thanks for the update.

There's still a monster in the woods but Mel made it to a safe spot. Also, maybe FINALLY learned to listen to their mom. :D

Obsidrius

This was such a nice chapter. I have been worried about Melody and I'm happy to see them finally in a safe place. They probably aren't totally out of the woods but it was nice seeing them taken care of.


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