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A Trip to the Playa: Chapter 5

🕑 Added 2023-02-09 17:00:05 +0000 UTC
A Trip to the Playa: Chapter 5

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That's probably the closest to writing lines I'm going to get in this book at least. I had to do that as a child and it did indeed suck. It's a classic punishment though, and something that will be revealed later about Trish makes her more prone to use a punishment like that. I guess we'll see! This won't be the last Baby Girl Project novella for sure. I'm thinking there will be 5ish of them before the story comes to the conclusion I want.

Paul Bennett

Great chapter. Having Kells write things down to reinforce her spoken words was nice. I hope she doesn't have to write lines later; because that sucks imo.

This is after Trish gave them a piece of her mind. I didn’t know Keeley was older than Trish but I guess I should have guess it. Speaking of ages. If you put the DOB for your main characters in your wiki we can celebrate them on here. Only Little ages though. It’s no fun getting old 😉

It throws how much Keeley is being infantalized into high relief. Also, I think Keeley agrees with you. 😺

Vidette and Dominika did fly her out. They've really taken Trish under their wing.

Gotta say, the reverse age gap is a surprisingly hot idea

Such a great chapter. I enjoyed it. It was a great surprise for Keely that Trish was able to make the trip. Vidette and Dominika must have flown her up. I think I’m going to like Trish. I am really glad she told off Vi and Nika for what they did to Keeley. They deserved it even though their hearts were in the right place. I liked how Trish and Keeley talked before anything else happened. They needed a serious talk. Maybe, Hopefully Keeley will break up with Zack now. I can’t wait to see what happens next.


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