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43: Epilogue (End of book 1)

🕑 Added 2025-08-09 14:44:49 +0000 UTC

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T J Ward

So I'll address a couple points here, achieving the goal of reaching Boltron is the 'climax' and yes I know its not some big fancy boss battle or life threatening disaster, however because I'm aiming for a fusion between slice of life and adventure this was the natural stopping point. That said, this could change if / when I look at publishing, and rewriting things to flow better, like shortening the first 15 chapters before the adventure started is something I considered, however its not something I am actively working on. To your other points, at the time the epilogue is there to fill in the gaps of time that Trevor has been travelling, which has only been a little over 2 weeks, that's why the Lords part is there, because it wouldn't have been an immediate thing, the Lord really didn't give a shit about Trevor he just wanted to say he had another rare class working for him. For people like George, Lukas, Micca, theirs covers the same time period that Trevor has been on the road, that said, as I was trialling the interludes up above, it could be something that gets retroactively added to the book if I'm looking to rewrite. Ultimately, I understand your point, but currently it wont be changing for a little while :)

Sloth

This isn’t really a completed book. There was no climax or anything. I would consider waiting to call this book done. Also, I would place this pov’s in locations that actually make sense and are relevant. For example, put the lords right after Trevor leaves with the caravan, or something like that. Micca, Lukas, and George feel like they fit better in an epilogue maybe, because there really isn’t a time that might be best suited to read them. Lily’s pov is placed where it should be, though as I said this really shouldn’t be an epilogue of a book.


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