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5.15 - Head Loss [T2]

🕑 Added 2026-01-26 18:03:35 +0000 UTC

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hercule pyro

on reread, this: "Get on the fucking pitch!" she yelled, pushing me, then pulling me, then trying to unzip my top. She appeared not to have much practise at removing clothes from grown men. is still very funny

Ted Steel

Oh this is gold. I should have thought of it!

Tareq Malikyar

Ah, Max committing football suicide by means of tinfoil hat is just so him. And I guess flash cars are actually a thing? English is weird. I hope that Max doesn't (but fear that he will) praise Helge for the concussion shenanigans, because head injuries are too serious to fuck around with.

Ed H

Gosh I wonder what’s going on with Helge

Richard Carling

Heartwarming show of character that Max can't grudge him it.

HN

I prefer the version "Just because you're paranoid doesn't mean they aren't out to get you." ;)

hercule pyro

Surprised max didn't claim the acting role play was his bachelor party

Geoff Urland

I think I'll be happier if it *was* all on Max's head and he becomes a tad bit less paranoid and hot headed going forward.

Ant1h3ld

Gotta say. I will be really disappointed if there isn't a referee/FA conspiracy at this point. And perfect finisher to the match. Very appropriate.

Thomas Barrett

I was a bit harsh on the last chapter. But damn, this is what I was talking about. 10/10 perfect balance of games, football nostalgia (I’ve been to Kenilworth Road a few times and actually live not far from Luton) and youth team / side character development with a done of morals and values.