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Being Fiona 248
🕑 Added 2024-09-26 01:15:47 +0000 UTC(Edit: Changed Jess' dialogue in the last panel, she had said the same thing in strip 246).
So how obvious is it that in the second panel Felix is seeing both the real world and the vr world overlaying it at the same time? (He has his real and virtual eyes open both at once).
I had considered having Jess mention how weird it feels to do that, but it bogged things down, so I skipped that explanation.
Comments
Senko
Such a Web of lies, Fiona really should have just said they weren't dating it was just a line used to avoid guys hitting on her when she just wants to play the game.
stevedore
I did think that the wide angle vuew made the one hand look large, and that made sense. The front leg, the bottom with the sock, looks a bit unnatural to me, - I think part of it is supposed to be his foot, but it seems just one thing to me. Minor detail. I love the the comic
From the Files of Robin Harper
It could also be the baggy pants model I used for reference.
Disbet
Panel 2 is very nice and well done. A successful example of "show, don't tell".
Disbet
Maybe caused by a wide-angle camera lens taking a picture so close to is subject. I liked it.
stevedore
Is it just me or do Felix's legs look odd in that first panel?
V-ger
Pretty obvious and well done
Bruxius
Panel 1 reminds me of a joke from the movie Serenity: Wash: She can read minds? That sounds like something from science fiction. Zoe: Dear, you live in a spaceship... Wash: Yeah, so?
