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Menma's Fetish Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2023-10-23 16:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Food&LiquorTrack2

Great chapter! You weren’t kidding about the length, I had to pace myself lol. But I didn’t see any ideal stopping points to cut the chapter short so I understand. Since it was a lengthy chapter, I hope you don’t mind a lengthy review. Kushina’s always been a willing participant to do whatever Sasuke wants, but you did a really good job illustrating her submissiveness in a new way this time around. It was satisfying to see her discover that she likes him being in control, even when they’re not trying to fulfill Minato’s kink. The way the story was going, I was sure you were going to take your time with Hinata. But I’m so glad that you decided to make Sasuke break her this early! Although I like normal Hinata (especially in Naruto’s fetish remastered), to me, broken Hinata is best Hinata. Also Menma getting a front row seat really made her transformation that more satisfying. And from the looks of it, she’s got more stamina than both Kushina and Naruko combined. Which is crazy but welcomed! Glad that Naruko was able to reconcile with Sasuke but her frustration was understandable to be honest. Though now I’m wondering what other characters you plan to introduce to the story now that she’s found the resolve to outlast anybody. I’d really like a dark horse contender if possible. But whatever you have planned, I’m looking forward to it. You’re on a hot streak!