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Series pilot script
🕑 Added 2023-04-06 10:46:05 +0000 UTCHi everyone
Bit of a different one for you today. As mentioned in previous vlogs I'm doing my master's and I've written a draft pilot script and series bible for a project and am looking for some feedback on it for my reflective essay.
Basically its called 'The Marionettes' and I'm trying to do Malcolm in the Middle by way of Twin Peaks. Its about a dysfunctional lower middle class family but there's always a sense that someone is watching them and controlling their lives.
Any thoughts on what works, what could be improved welcome. Either post here in comments on drop me a message.
Cheers everyone
(also should have my next video for you soon - its the video essay about metafiction I mentioned last time)
Stu
