OCICI
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Love U Too
🕑 Added 2024-10-02 15:10:00 +0000 UTCAs I told you in the preview...
This time I decided to experiment a bit with the storytelling.
I'm satisfied with the result and I hope you like it as much as I do.
Once again, thanks for your support, have a good week! (•◡•)
Comments
OCICI
I just checked the link and everything looks normal, what appears when you open it?
Nith
Hey, I can’t open the link
OCICI
About the sub-fonts... Do you think it should be smaller?, sometimes I've thought about making it bigger haha. Usually the colors are to differentiate each character, I thought about putting a single color and put the name of the character before, do you think it would be better?
OCICI
Thank you very much for your feedback, I will take it into account!
OCICI
I decided to end it that way because it looked a bit “cinematic”, however I also missed ending the scene with a “climax”, the next one will be that way for sure ^^
PoppaDiddz
The riding scenes 😍🤤 BUT I wished you did something similar like “mi amor” and had her ride at double speed so he cums 😅 overall tho, great work OCICI 💯👏🏽
glennjisan
Nice little story. I thought the seduction scenes could've been a bit longer. Maybe some moving scenes interspersed with the still shots (and maybe some camera panning in the still shots ... it adds a little more flow to each "flashback"). The sub-fonts are a little large ... maybe a "bold" stting would help and maybe a dark pink color, as pastel yellow and blue make them way too washed-out and similar. I encourage you to continue with the stories. I enjoyed the tale!
