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173 Interlude: Cherie Vasil 2 Electric Boogaloo

🕑 Added 2023-09-11 21:44:27 +0000 UTC

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THE SAVAGE KITTY

Tsk im still hoping for a motorcycle guy cameo in future arcs

Lucy Edwards

lmao, that would be a fun idea, but she encountered him all the way over in colorado, which is waaay too far from montreal for him to ever have come into contact with heartbreaker or his kids. It's a fun idea, but too much of a reach to be realistic I'm afraid

Lucy Edwards

oh and all of his kids are redeemable, in canon they all end up working as heroes, except for maybe guillamore nicholas and valentine, idk bout them cuz this happens in ward, the sequel that I haven't read and they don;t have a wiki page each

Lucy Edwards

Well, for the first part, this isn't going to be an arc with Heartbreaker, he's just part of a bigger arc, nor is she likely to eat him. That being said, it is incredibly likely that Cherie will take over the family or something and join the Clowns cuz I like her :)

Lucy Edwards

lmao, it was a horrid pun and you should be ashamed but it did make me laugh, so I guess I should be ashamed too xD

THE SAVAGE KITTY

Just an idea but you can have motorcycle guy be in this arc my idea was for him to be mastered and then lusia saves him and he becomes a sort of alfred figure taking care of her personal affairs and fixing up her bike's :)

Scarletmenace

Thanks for the chapter! Also RIP shirt, horrid pun intended

THE SAVAGE KITTY

I also think Lusia should introduce cheire to the idea of not mastering everyone she meets because otherwise she will live in eternal boredom and mabye semi adopt her or something Also perhaps giving her an invite to the trope

THE SAVAGE KITTY

Honestly i was pretty sceptical at first hyponosis and stuff is rarely done well often making the women or men put under hypnosis feel like comeplete and total dolls but you have made it interesting as instead of it being do this and they do it here it takes actual skill which is nice but it's more do to the fact that I absolutely hate people who completely take away someone's Sanctuary of mind and freewill and you having the scum of scum (in my opinion) essentially be mastered by someone without a master power brings me a great amount of joy. I however do not think his children are irredeemable at least some of them if im being honest i just hope this arc ends with lusia eating the scum bastard and gaining some form of master power but not really use it other then to increase her own defence's against being mastered not because of my personal preference but because if everyone around her turned into toys everything would get boring pretty fast.


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