My Little Ventrue Pt.5 Ch.11 (Ch. 65)
🕑 Added 2020-01-29 03:22:42 +0000 UTCMy editor is sick! They're in the hospital! So I did my usual double edit pass approach to this chapter, but it'll never be as tight as having a proper editor. Hopefully my editor friend recovers.
You may notice I spend a little time poking at what makes the Jen character 'tick' in this chapter. Jen is based on a woman I know in real life, a very open-minded person, and with how much MLV is based on sexual exploration, I enjoy getting across her very unusual views in the story. I know it may not be for everyone, so feel free to comment on what you think about Jen's views on romance and sexuality.
Comments
Novus Animus
:thumbsup: Though you might not be so happy if I put Noah through some hell.
Noah beaulieu
I actually did a double take when I saw the name I was lucky enough to pick out. Thanks again lol.
Grimlakin
Fun read.